for The Ring on the Moon3/16/2003 c1 
23suckerplucker
you have really really beutiful images in this piece, but i think that in some places (lines 9 and 14 especialy) you tried to be too formal and archaic
zac
23suckerpluckeryou have really really beutiful images in this piece, but i think that in some places (lines 9 and 14 especialy) you tried to be too formal and archaic
zac