
9/17/2003 c1
16anti-you
i have some Constructive criticism- on the first line you say "i get so nervous around HIM" and then on the seventh line you say "just the sight of YOU" you need to fix that.. but other than that i think its great!

i have some Constructive criticism- on the first line you say "i get so nervous around HIM" and then on the seventh line you say "just the sight of YOU" you need to fix that.. but other than that i think its great!
3/17/2003 c1 The shadow
These song is expressing every 'girl crush'. Iwas really realeated with it.
These song is expressing every 'girl crush'. Iwas really realeated with it.