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3/17/2003 c2 7Runwithscythes
i like both as well. very cool!
3/17/2003 c1 27Loganberry
Oh, the rough version, definitely - the emotion is so much stronger in that. It's always a risk when revising, that the final version becomes a bit "over-polished". To quote myself , a smooth, perfect object is often cold and impersonal.
3/16/2003 c2 2Auburgine
I'm gonna say I like the rough one better, I think it has more honest emotion...if that makes any sense. Anyway, both were good, keep writing!

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