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10/10/2003 c1 59Papillons Noirs
You know, a lot of your poetry is way over my head but this was easier to understand. It's a great idea. I think it's interesting that the title of the book fits so well. The only thing I didn't like was that you used a talking leaf, and combined with the strong rhyme and rhythm, it made the poem sound sort of child-oriented, and that doesn't seem to match the message

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