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2/18/2005 c1 11arachibutyrophobia
its so quiet and sad...beautiful imagery, really reinforces the message/mood. Well done.

~birdytamel~
10/14/2003 c1 10Lemon Drop
I hope this isn't about your childhood.

I like the way you describe the sounds of the swing...I can imagine myself there, and your imagery is wonderful.

Keep up the good work!

LD
9/3/2003 c1 14Ninsetta Tristel Sundar
very sad but good
8/18/2003 c1 43child-dragon
EErie. Very haunting. Great emotional impact on it. Well done.
7/16/2003 c1 16ElvenRanger
Oh.

That was so sad and beautiful. I love sad things. Great job.
6/12/2003 c1 2Mystified
I love the analogy you developed with the swing. Brilliant.
6/3/2003 c1 37Animagess
A tad on the dark and quietly haunting side.. But then, that's probably what the effect was intended to be. Not bad.
4/22/2003 c1 54Werecat99
That was unbelievably sad. And yet beautiful...

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