for Bubble gum4/29/2003 c1 
128Zainab
I don't like gum. (yes i know i'm strange) cut haiku? I've heard of them, but have no idea how to write them..interesting haiku!
128ZainabI don't like gum. (yes i know i'm strange) cut haiku? I've heard of them, but have no idea how to write them..interesting haiku!
4/25/2003 c1 39Kesshi Mashin
It's so annoying when you blow those frickin bubbles, and they go and blow up in your face... heh, cute. Keep on writin!
39Kesshi MashinIt's so annoying when you blow those frickin bubbles, and they go and blow up in your face... heh, cute. Keep on writin!
4/10/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
I like Bubble Gum - cos they aren't allowed to be sold here in at my country. *sigh* -_- Hey - Write more Cut Haikus ok? Hehe *Be sure to check out the Reverse Cut Haiku... It's quite nice to write with.*
~DW
28ChaoxAngelI like Bubble Gum - cos they aren't allowed to be sold here in at my country. *sigh* -_- Hey - Write more Cut Haikus ok? Hehe *Be sure to check out the Reverse Cut Haiku... It's quite nice to write with.*
~DW
4/7/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
OOh, bubble gum... Not a big fan of ABC (already been chewed) gum, but I'll take a fresh one. Thanks for the review!
12All Mighty TerrestrialOOh, bubble gum... Not a big fan of ABC (already been chewed) gum, but I'll take a fresh one. Thanks for the review!
3/31/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
hehe, cool. nice "cut" poem. yeah, i wanna piece now. anyway, nice work! keep it up!
36obsidian katanahehe, cool. nice "cut" poem. yeah, i wanna piece now. anyway, nice work! keep it up!
3/28/2003 c1 17Jade6
What a catchy little piece, lol. I liked how you made the two lines rhyme... and this was cute, lol.
Jade
17Jade6What a catchy little piece, lol. I liked how you made the two lines rhyme... and this was cute, lol.
Jade
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
funny and simple, with a tickle-me sorta of a charm. hehe, don't really know how to describe it; just know it's great! :)
124Penumbrafunny and simple, with a tickle-me sorta of a charm. hehe, don't really know how to describe it; just know it's great! :)
3/21/2003 c1 Frodo
Lol, ok. Kewlness. I'm sorry about the last review for your "Surprise?" poem. I didn't realize that it was humor, and I don't think I was paying well enough attention. I was listening to that Simple Plan song.
I'm a dick... I'm addicted to you..
That song. Ok, good work.
-Frodo
Lol, ok. Kewlness. I'm sorry about the last review for your "Surprise?" poem. I didn't realize that it was humor, and I don't think I was paying well enough attention. I was listening to that Simple Plan song.
I'm a dick... I'm addicted to you..
That song. Ok, good work.
-Frodo
3/20/2003 c1 64not sure yet
interesting style, i like, and again another cute topic, lmao, one that actually seems to occur a lot in life actually, good job!
64not sure yetinteresting style, i like, and again another cute topic, lmao, one that actually seems to occur a lot in life actually, good job!