for Hell on the surface8/15/2003 c4 new grammer queen guess who
okay well, it's good chaps r a bit short and grammers a little off but not enough to make me scream! Girl when you get back you better set your behind to writing!
okay well, it's good chaps r a bit short and grammers a little off but not enough to make me scream! Girl when you get back you better set your behind to writing!
5/19/2003 c4 
6Talon Tearine
This is cool. It must be hard to write so much when you don't have much time or caught in writer's block. (Damn writer's block... hate it so much)
Well... things are well and good in the story so far...
6Talon TearineThis is cool. It must be hard to write so much when you don't have much time or caught in writer's block. (Damn writer's block... hate it so much)
Well... things are well and good in the story so far...
5/15/2003 c3 mike
I think that this is a very good story and I like how you use some things from dungons and dragons
I think that this is a very good story and I like how you use some things from dungons and dragons
5/14/2003 c3 Talon Tearine
Hey cool. So Seth sends the dead away.
I'll be checking your other stories as well as this one soon!
Hey cool. So Seth sends the dead away.
I'll be checking your other stories as well as this one soon!
3/31/2003 c2 Talon Tearine
Hey, what a great idea of using bells. I've never read anything that used bells as an 'equipment'... keep it up... so what kind of being is Seth? A sender of the dead of some sort?
Hey, what a great idea of using bells. I've never read anything that used bells as an 'equipment'... keep it up... so what kind of being is Seth? A sender of the dead of some sort?
3/21/2003 c1 8Stallioness
Okay this is really good the only suggestion i have is breaks. I got a yelled at about that for many stories that i wrote so don't feel bad. It's just sometimes and one of them being now i have trouble reading small words so that is my only suggestion but seeing as i'm obsessed with necromancers i will read it a soon as you post! KEEP POSTING! okay that out of my system i'll shut up TTYL.
8StallionessOkay this is really good the only suggestion i have is breaks. I got a yelled at about that for many stories that i wrote so don't feel bad. It's just sometimes and one of them being now i have trouble reading small words so that is my only suggestion but seeing as i'm obsessed with necromancers i will read it a soon as you post! KEEP POSTING! okay that out of my system i'll shut up TTYL.
3/19/2003 c1 6Talon Tearine
Really cool! Update soon! Hope that it is alright for me to add you to my favourites list... *Smiles*
6Talon TearineReally cool! Update soon! Hope that it is alright for me to add you to my favourites list... *Smiles*