for Sun Moon Stars10/24/2013 c1 GRACE
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9/28/2003 c2 
13FiveToCharm
it's a good story...i luv fantasy... but in sum places it's a bit confusing with the names... is haven a panther?
13FiveToCharmit's a good story...i luv fantasy... but in sum places it's a bit confusing with the names... is haven a panther?
9/12/2003 c5 Aicila
I guess you and Cacahuate Loca are pretty good friends or something, because she mentions you in her bio. That's where i found you, in fact. Pretty good story, don't know why you haven't updated, but i'm hoping to see an update soon. nice work.
Aicila
I guess you and Cacahuate Loca are pretty good friends or something, because she mentions you in her bio. That's where i found you, in fact. Pretty good story, don't know why you haven't updated, but i'm hoping to see an update soon. nice work.
Aicila
7/15/2003 c5 12Smiley Gurl 1019
Well, let me just crawl into my computer and walk into your mind and pull out that story, then put it back in the computer. This story needs NO IMPROVEMENT WHATSOEVER! The only thing is the small spelling/grammar errors in the first chapter. JUST HURRY UP BEFORE I FIND A WAY TO TAP MINDS AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE MORE!
HURRY!
12Smiley Gurl 1019Well, let me just crawl into my computer and walk into your mind and pull out that story, then put it back in the computer. This story needs NO IMPROVEMENT WHATSOEVER! The only thing is the small spelling/grammar errors in the first chapter. JUST HURRY UP BEFORE I FIND A WAY TO TAP MINDS AND FORCE YOU TO WRITE MORE!
HURRY!
7/15/2003 c1 Smiley Gurl 1019
Wow. WOW. WOW!
This was absolutely awesome. I just wanted to review now so I can review many times more. BUT THIS IS PHENOMINAL!
Phenominal doesn't even describe it.
It's so sad, the details so clear, it seems like I'm watching a movie instead of reading on my computer!
Once I become a movie director, this will be the first thing I will try to do, provided I meet you and you agree that this can be made into a movie!
I MUST READ MORE!
Wow. WOW. WOW!
This was absolutely awesome. I just wanted to review now so I can review many times more. BUT THIS IS PHENOMINAL!
Phenominal doesn't even describe it.
It's so sad, the details so clear, it seems like I'm watching a movie instead of reading on my computer!
Once I become a movie director, this will be the first thing I will try to do, provided I meet you and you agree that this can be made into a movie!
I MUST READ MORE!
7/11/2003 c5 aceles
YOU MUST CONTINUE THE STORYOR I WILL BE SAHAHAHAHAD! By the way, keep reviewing my stuff, AND ANYBODY WHO SEES THIS REVIEW PLEASE READ MY STUFF!
*sob Need...exposure...need...reviews...HEY! I had an idea! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE advertize me on yourbio. Please? PRETTY PLEASE!
Away!
Aceles
YOU MUST CONTINUE THE STORYOR I WILL BE SAHAHAHAHAD! By the way, keep reviewing my stuff, AND ANYBODY WHO SEES THIS REVIEW PLEASE READ MY STUFF!
*sob Need...exposure...need...reviews...HEY! I had an idea! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE advertize me on yourbio. Please? PRETTY PLEASE!
Away!
Aceles
7/10/2003 c5 Tweak McFreak a.k.a Baka Virus Host
Gr... Apparently I've reviewed Chapter 5... Stupid compie...
I feel your pain! I've got Writer's Block for just about every story I am writing. *Runs away from a big blue block labeled "Writer's Block" that is chasing after me*
Oh, and uhh... thanks for the lesson on French insults! ^_^
Gr... Apparently I've reviewed Chapter 5... Stupid compie...
I feel your pain! I've got Writer's Block for just about every story I am writing. *Runs away from a big blue block labeled "Writer's Block" that is chasing after me*
Oh, and uhh... thanks for the lesson on French insults! ^_^
7/6/2003 c5 A Tired Queen of the Realm
*mutters angrily under her breath about something involving a plot for Yaviewen's demise since she won't frickin update*
THANK YOU FOR ADVERTISING FOR ME!
*mutters angrily under her breath about something involving a plot for Yaviewen's demise since she won't frickin update*
THANK YOU FOR ADVERTISING FOR ME!
7/6/2003 c4 IrisCourarEvenStar
The stars the child
The maiden the Moon...*Humms softly*
This is so cool Peanut! Guess what?
I be adden my story soon^.~ Finally found name for it ahem' "Society of Legend-Star Children" *purrs*
~*Iris*~
PS...FRIEZAS HOT!:P
The stars the child
The maiden the Moon...*Humms softly*
This is so cool Peanut! Guess what?
I be adden my story soon^.~ Finally found name for it ahem' "Society of Legend-Star Children" *purrs*
~*Iris*~
PS...FRIEZAS HOT!:P
6/19/2003 c4 Mrs. Easter Bunny P
It's Great, of course. It would be really nice if you would indent quotations, I keep getting confused about who's talking. Oh and was the Prophesy supposed to start "The Stars will be Child"? Makes more sence that way, But of course making cents is over-rated, making dollars is more efficient. Oh well, I love it anyway.
Update Anila!
TTYL
Luv ya.
Bye
It's Great, of course. It would be really nice if you would indent quotations, I keep getting confused about who's talking. Oh and was the Prophesy supposed to start "The Stars will be Child"? Makes more sence that way, But of course making cents is over-rated, making dollars is more efficient. Oh well, I love it anyway.
Update Anila!
TTYL
Luv ya.
Bye
6/17/2003 c4 8Veg-Head Cannibalism
OOh! Cool prophecy! "The Maiden shall bleed"... Me likeses! You better update soon or the wrath of the evil Ninja Monkeys from Uranus shall be thrust upon you! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
8Veg-Head CannibalismOOh! Cool prophecy! "The Maiden shall bleed"... Me likeses! You better update soon or the wrath of the evil Ninja Monkeys from Uranus shall be thrust upon you! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
6/16/2003 c1 11Aero-Rhapsody
Thanks for reviewing my story! This is very interesting, all cliff hangingly and like! Well, not exactly, but who is the queen at the end? Must know! I think there is a problem with the spacing of the paragraphs because i was a bit confused because you went back and forth between the characters and i became a bit dizzy with that. I think that you just have to go and fix that(is there something where the FP.com people just delete spaces and spelling because that is what they did to me). Very realistic to the word "Fantasy", if you know what i mean, that is seldomly achieved by some fantasy authors. I like how you are starting to build your own world, with unique tribes and kingdoms. I'm going to read on, so this one must be short.
11Aero-RhapsodyThanks for reviewing my story! This is very interesting, all cliff hangingly and like! Well, not exactly, but who is the queen at the end? Must know! I think there is a problem with the spacing of the paragraphs because i was a bit confused because you went back and forth between the characters and i became a bit dizzy with that. I think that you just have to go and fix that(is there something where the FP.com people just delete spaces and spelling because that is what they did to me). Very realistic to the word "Fantasy", if you know what i mean, that is seldomly achieved by some fantasy authors. I like how you are starting to build your own world, with unique tribes and kingdoms. I'm going to read on, so this one must be short.
6/16/2003 c4 Aceles
WOOHOO! GO YOU! YOU UPDATED YAY!(so did I FYI) Nice chapter, loved the prophecy at the end but got a little confused with the Zoay meeting Tobias part. Anyway, keep it up!
AWAY
Aceles
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WOOHOO! GO YOU! YOU UPDATED YAY!(so did I FYI) Nice chapter, loved the prophecy at the end but got a little confused with the Zoay meeting Tobias part. Anyway, keep it up!
AWAY
Aceles
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6/16/2003 c2 Cacahuate Loca too lazy to sign in
Aceless, you aren't the only one who knows who he is! Ha ha, and I betcha I know more about what's going to happen than you do! *sticks out tongue, then laughs at self for being stupid* Yeah, sorry, I'm just in a really competitive mood today...dunno why...Anywhat, those of you who are bored to death waiting for Yaviewen to update can always go check out my stuff...*innocent grin* I'm swear I'm not shamelessly promoting my stuff using Michelle's story, honest...
Aceless, you aren't the only one who knows who he is! Ha ha, and I betcha I know more about what's going to happen than you do! *sticks out tongue, then laughs at self for being stupid* Yeah, sorry, I'm just in a really competitive mood today...dunno why...Anywhat, those of you who are bored to death waiting for Yaviewen to update can always go check out my stuff...*innocent grin* I'm swear I'm not shamelessly promoting my stuff using Michelle's story, honest...