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96Liebe Sasa
This story has a really good plot going. I'd like to see more of it.
Just one hint though; you're supposed to start a new paragraph when a new person is talking. Kind of a silly rule, some people think, but it does make things easier to follow.
^-^ I like you're writing, and hope to see more original stuff from you.
~Mizery Rose~
96Liebe SasaThis story has a really good plot going. I'd like to see more of it.
Just one hint though; you're supposed to start a new paragraph when a new person is talking. Kind of a silly rule, some people think, but it does make things easier to follow.
^-^ I like you're writing, and hope to see more original stuff from you.
~Mizery Rose~
6/4/2003 c1 19Silverwolf Guild
Hey! GOOD STORY! I love it! One question- did you take this out of real life? This sounds suspiciously like some of our conversations...*quirks an eyebrow* Or not. Anyway, the only thing I would change is that I would have the speech in it's own paragraph simply because it's easier to follow. But over all it's good! ^_^ Yay!
-SG
19Silverwolf GuildHey! GOOD STORY! I love it! One question- did you take this out of real life? This sounds suspiciously like some of our conversations...*quirks an eyebrow* Or not. Anyway, the only thing I would change is that I would have the speech in it's own paragraph simply because it's easier to follow. But over all it's good! ^_^ Yay!
-SG
5/30/2003 c1 Frozen in Heat can't find the energy to sign in
awesome story! i decided to return the favor of you reading my story by reading yours.. yay! a nice reward for all my clicking to get to it! keep writing it; you're developing the plot really well.
awesome story! i decided to return the favor of you reading my story by reading yours.. yay! a nice reward for all my clicking to get to it! keep writing it; you're developing the plot really well.