for Fire and Water11/29/2003 c1 
6Lamia Aduro
read it! happy now? its a good beginning haven't finished the chapter but thought this'd get u off my back. i like the language used, reminds me of the dumbass book i hve to read for english (Tess of the d'Urbervilles)
6Lamia Aduroread it! happy now? its a good beginning haven't finished the chapter but thought this'd get u off my back. i like the language used, reminds me of the dumbass book i hve to read for english (Tess of the d'Urbervilles)
5/1/2003 c5 molly farlow
hey,
I really like your style of writing. So few people actually take the time to make the writing as good as the plot; keep it up! I hope to read the next chapter soon ; )
ps: when you're writing what someone is saying, and the person is cut off, it's good to put in a - or something, to indicate he or she hadn't finished his or her sentence, otherwise one would think that's all they had to say. later!
hey,
I really like your style of writing. So few people actually take the time to make the writing as good as the plot; keep it up! I hope to read the next chapter soon ; )
ps: when you're writing what someone is saying, and the person is cut off, it's good to put in a - or something, to indicate he or she hadn't finished his or her sentence, otherwise one would think that's all they had to say. later!
4/30/2003 c5 6Miss Sybil Vane
Yes! You UPDATED! I'm going to go read it right after I'm done with my homework (haha!)...
6Miss Sybil VaneYes! You UPDATED! I'm going to go read it right after I'm done with my homework (haha!)...
4/2/2003 c1 26Helenlicious
Yes yes YES I like it! Can't wait to read more (i don't have time to read it all now... :{)
You are an amazing writer; I was totally drawn in with the very first sentence. I promise to read + review the rest of the story!
26HelenliciousYes yes YES I like it! Can't wait to read more (i don't have time to read it all now... :{)
You are an amazing writer; I was totally drawn in with the very first sentence. I promise to read + review the rest of the story!
3/25/2003 c3 plientje
ok if u dont write the sequel soon...
ok if u dont write the sequel soon...
3/24/2003 c1 plientje
well well well... what a good story!
i never expected this from u laura! may i suggest a professional writing carreer!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
well well well... what a good story!
i never expected this from u laura! may i suggest a professional writing carreer!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
3/23/2003 c3 6Miss Sybil Vane
This is very, very good! Just watch out...you have a few grammatical/spelling mistakes. But, overall, it's excellent!
6Miss Sybil VaneThis is very, very good! Just watch out...you have a few grammatical/spelling mistakes. But, overall, it's excellent!
3/22/2003 c2 8Black Velvet Princess
Hi! um, I am having problems deciphering who is who, because there is someone named alex and someone named martin and somone named earn and someone else too who I cant remember the name of and it is making me v. confused@_@. aside from that, I think your story roks!
8Black Velvet PrincessHi! um, I am having problems deciphering who is who, because there is someone named alex and someone named martin and somone named earn and someone else too who I cant remember the name of and it is making me v. confused@_@. aside from that, I think your story roks!