for No Rhyme9/20/2003 c1 romancingthemoon
This is a nice collection. I especially like the lines:
whose windows open like flowers
whose windows shut like hearts;
it really clicks with me. These poems are subtle and rich. I like their short length and the fact that you didn't sacrifice rhyme for meter. Thanks for all your reviews!
This is a nice collection. I especially like the lines:
whose windows open like flowers
whose windows shut like hearts;
it really clicks with me. These poems are subtle and rich. I like their short length and the fact that you didn't sacrifice rhyme for meter. Thanks for all your reviews!
5/4/2003 c1 
43DuckyEA
oh, i just love your poems =)
they're so descriptive and pretty, lol and they don't rhyme! =)
43DuckyEAoh, i just love your poems =)
they're so descriptive and pretty, lol and they don't rhyme! =)
3/22/2003 c1 eponine42
some friend you are, not telling me that you posted something else. Ok, now were in a fight, as my sister would say. J/k. How are you feeling? I know I should write this all in an e-mail, but this will get to you as well, so w/e. Moink!
Dobby's word!
some friend you are, not telling me that you posted something else. Ok, now were in a fight, as my sister would say. J/k. How are you feeling? I know I should write this all in an e-mail, but this will get to you as well, so w/e. Moink!
Dobby's word!
3/21/2003 c1 Colorain
Whoo. ::breathes out deeply:: Stars are an awesome subject.
These are all *really* good poems. There's just something about them that makes you need to hear them spoken out loud - their flow, or rhythm (gah, hope that's spelled right :D), or just that way they move so fluidly on the tongue. I confess I'm guilty of reading more than out loud.
Thank you for sharing, and I'm off to read more.
Whoo. ::breathes out deeply:: Stars are an awesome subject.
These are all *really* good poems. There's just something about them that makes you need to hear them spoken out loud - their flow, or rhythm (gah, hope that's spelled right :D), or just that way they move so fluidly on the tongue. I confess I'm guilty of reading more than out loud.
Thank you for sharing, and I'm off to read more.