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9/16/2005 c1 41sarah1491
It's a really nice poem, just some of your lines seem a bit long, or just maybe broken in the wrong place. I like this poem though, I think it was really kind of you to deticate it to your friend. :) You are a talented poet, and I have already put one of your poems on my favorites list! Good Job & Good Luck with future poetry. ^_^
11/8/2003 c1 339Trinka
again good poem keep wriing
3/26/2003 c1 7Khalida
Gnat, this is your conscience speaking:

Anyway, you must write more poems about me! Just kidding. I would never want to be praised like that again. I don't deserve it. But you got one thing wrong... I do laugh at you! HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! You see, I am your conscience so you must listen to me. Good, Natalie, you get a treat!

Lol, I'm just joking you! Du bist lustig, und Ich mag diese Geschichte!
3/21/2003 c1 18electricity
I like your poem! The title matches the story very well! I like it!

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