for Death9/16/2005 c1 
41sarah1491
I realize that you use this rhyme scheme in a lot of your poems. I like it,but it isn't too original. I think your poem is nice, but try to make your rhyming a bit more unique. I think you'll get more reviews that way. ;) Just my opinion. I like the poem though. :D
41sarah1491I realize that you use this rhyme scheme in a lot of your poems. I like it,but it isn't too original. I think your poem is nice, but try to make your rhyming a bit more unique. I think you'll get more reviews that way. ;) Just my opinion. I like the poem though. :D