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9/16/2005 c1 41sarah1491
I really like how on every secong line you do a word twice, and then rhyme it on every fourth line. Very well done. Nice rhyme scheme. ^_^ It would be interesting if you could write more poems with as interesting rhyming patterns as this one. :) Keep up the great work.
3/26/2003 c1 Needa S
Excellent! Keep writing..
3/26/2003 c1 7Khalida
Ah! Nhalida killed herself! AH!

Well, maybe not, but it's still quite wonderfully written. Great job, Gnatty!
3/21/2003 c1 72Magnificent Moi
^_^ Very original.

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