for The Going Ons9/16/2005 c1 
41sarah1491
I really like how on every secong line you do a word twice, and then rhyme it on every fourth line. Very well done. Nice rhyme scheme. ^_^ It would be interesting if you could write more poems with as interesting rhyming patterns as this one. :) Keep up the great work.
41sarah1491I really like how on every secong line you do a word twice, and then rhyme it on every fourth line. Very well done. Nice rhyme scheme. ^_^ It would be interesting if you could write more poems with as interesting rhyming patterns as this one. :) Keep up the great work.