for Inspiration5/15/2004 c1 Forever Fearless
Great poem. TK is good like that, and he's the one who told me your pen name, you are a great writer. Keep up the good work and feel free to looks at my stuff that pales in comparison to both yours and his.
Forever Fearless (nsi)
Great poem. TK is good like that, and he's the one who told me your pen name, you are a great writer. Keep up the good work and feel free to looks at my stuff that pales in comparison to both yours and his.
Forever Fearless (nsi)
8/14/2003 c1 
5Aake Redfield
Wow, amazing piece of work, and from what I have seen of your other poems, your talent really shows. Your friend TK must be a very lucky person to have such a beautiful poem in his honor. Once again, great work!
5Aake RedfieldWow, amazing piece of work, and from what I have seen of your other poems, your talent really shows. Your friend TK must be a very lucky person to have such a beautiful poem in his honor. Once again, great work!
7/13/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Great work. Extremely well-written. I loved the line "I am a mere pawn of your language." Greta work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenGreat work. Extremely well-written. I loved the line "I am a mere pawn of your language." Greta work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/20/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
A very lovely dedication.
I wanted to thank you for the reviews, and explain about "Broken". First of all, I did not take offence at your words, I was rather thankful you pointed those things out. Second, I would like to say that that was my plea, not for Him to break my spirit but to break my willfulness, that I might be only a servant and not thinking of myself. Once again thank you for the reviews and I can tell that there was real feeling behind them.
34Wasted PostageA very lovely dedication.
I wanted to thank you for the reviews, and explain about "Broken". First of all, I did not take offence at your words, I was rather thankful you pointed those things out. Second, I would like to say that that was my plea, not for Him to break my spirit but to break my willfulness, that I might be only a servant and not thinking of myself. Once again thank you for the reviews and I can tell that there was real feeling behind them.
5/1/2003 c1 11midnight dreams
*smiles* beautifully written. Wonderful choice of words...wow, i'd love to have that kind of inspiration, no wonder you write superbly. Read mine, please? thank you. :)
11midnight dreams*smiles* beautifully written. Wonderful choice of words...wow, i'd love to have that kind of inspiration, no wonder you write superbly. Read mine, please? thank you. :)
4/16/2003 c1 14reveileb maerdyad
aw, what more can i say that hasn't been said? just this, i guess: thank you for your poems. they all are great sources of inspiration, and they always make me smile. i'm sure tk loves this. :)
14reveileb maerdyadaw, what more can i say that hasn't been said? just this, i guess: thank you for your poems. they all are great sources of inspiration, and they always make me smile. i'm sure tk loves this. :)
4/3/2003 c1 3charolastra
Oh, wow. You really have a gift with words. The imagery here is beautiful; I especially liked the lines, "coating my typed words in a golden glaze." I understand exactly how you feel; I've been lucky enough to have some really supportive and inspirational friends as well. You just manage to phrase your thanks far better than I could ever hope to! =p
Great work; really moving.
Clara
3charolastraOh, wow. You really have a gift with words. The imagery here is beautiful; I especially liked the lines, "coating my typed words in a golden glaze." I understand exactly how you feel; I've been lucky enough to have some really supportive and inspirational friends as well. You just manage to phrase your thanks far better than I could ever hope to! =p
Great work; really moving.
Clara
3/28/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
This is very sweet of you, dedicating such well-written poem to your friend.
36Psycho-kyugurlThis is very sweet of you, dedicating such well-written poem to your friend.
3/27/2003 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
aw! so sweet! what a wonderful poem! Filled with powerful words, imagery and just...wonderfullness. you really are truely a writer jade. i have no doubt in my mind that you will have a writing career that shoots of the scale! amazing.
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXaw! so sweet! what a wonderful poem! Filled with powerful words, imagery and just...wonderfullness. you really are truely a writer jade. i have no doubt in my mind that you will have a writing career that shoots of the scale! amazing.
3/26/2003 c1 35ScarletDeva
You! You poet you! This was awesome! Great! The imagery, the flow, I'm slightly tempted to hate you but you're too nice for that... Ugh. You do honor to our gender dear...
35ScarletDevaYou! You poet you! This was awesome! Great! The imagery, the flow, I'm slightly tempted to hate you but you're too nice for that... Ugh. You do honor to our gender dear...
3/26/2003 c1 34NeoDragonZero
i have to agree, this was a very moving piece, and im sure TK's gonna be reading the poem every once in a while. i liked how u started it all, with the
"rich honey,
coating my typed words in a golden glaze
"
"Whatever word or image that first caught your notice,
or phrase that reached into your soul
recalling summer lit nights by a silver moon,
I thank..."
this was another small piece that struck me as beautiful when i first read it, mainly about the 'summer lit nights by a silver moon', just how it was worded... wow.
"...inspiration... that evasive, elusive source for the writer’s pen..."
this was yet another interesting part, showing that, while this is a dedication, u still somehow manage to capture that this applies to everyone as well as urself. it is true, it is hard to find inspiration, and sometimes that inspiration comes in the ones we love, such as ur friend TK, or from simple things like daily images we see, finding new meaning in them when we look at them from a different angle or perspective.
all in all this is a very beautiful poem, very elegant with the wording, yet having a universal feel to it also. i love the imagery, like the honey coated keys and the summer nights, as well as how u "...become as clumsy, as some awkward youth, in love-struck passion..." just reading it over again, i still cannot find any other word but beautiful for this poem, and with this i dont find it repetitive at all (tho i hate being repetitive... *pulls out handy-dandy Thesaurus, grins*).
fantastic work once again, and the dedictee (is that even a word? o well, it is now!) must be very touched that u would do somethin like this, expressing ur hearts love and admiration for someone so fragile, yet giving wat u find urself in lack of at times (as do we all). but until next time, keep up the fantastic work and hopefully we can talk online soon. take it easy.
Neo
34NeoDragonZeroi have to agree, this was a very moving piece, and im sure TK's gonna be reading the poem every once in a while. i liked how u started it all, with the
"rich honey,
coating my typed words in a golden glaze
"
"Whatever word or image that first caught your notice,
or phrase that reached into your soul
recalling summer lit nights by a silver moon,
I thank..."
this was another small piece that struck me as beautiful when i first read it, mainly about the 'summer lit nights by a silver moon', just how it was worded... wow.
"...inspiration... that evasive, elusive source for the writer’s pen..."
this was yet another interesting part, showing that, while this is a dedication, u still somehow manage to capture that this applies to everyone as well as urself. it is true, it is hard to find inspiration, and sometimes that inspiration comes in the ones we love, such as ur friend TK, or from simple things like daily images we see, finding new meaning in them when we look at them from a different angle or perspective.
all in all this is a very beautiful poem, very elegant with the wording, yet having a universal feel to it also. i love the imagery, like the honey coated keys and the summer nights, as well as how u "...become as clumsy, as some awkward youth, in love-struck passion..." just reading it over again, i still cannot find any other word but beautiful for this poem, and with this i dont find it repetitive at all (tho i hate being repetitive... *pulls out handy-dandy Thesaurus, grins*).
fantastic work once again, and the dedictee (is that even a word? o well, it is now!) must be very touched that u would do somethin like this, expressing ur hearts love and admiration for someone so fragile, yet giving wat u find urself in lack of at times (as do we all). but until next time, keep up the fantastic work and hopefully we can talk online soon. take it easy.
Neo