for Boys Have Selective Seeing7/15/2003 c1 
13avidelecteur
That's really good. You have the whole rhyme and rythym thing going, but it still says as much as a free verse. I think that's the first time I've seen that... but granted, I don't read all that much poetry. Anyway, you're good. Keep writing.
13avidelecteurThat's really good. You have the whole rhyme and rythym thing going, but it still says as much as a free verse. I think that's the first time I've seen that... but granted, I don't read all that much poetry. Anyway, you're good. Keep writing.