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6/28/2006 c11 3Still Pretending
that was horrible, not your writing but the fact that he could be so mean. and I really believed all his crap. anywho, it was really good.
4/8/2006 c1 2salazarfire
wow I like it it is realy cool i was hooked in when i read the first paragraph
2/24/2005 c2 17Tessabe
One minor thought occurred to me, if the girl was supposed to be her ancestor then she couldn't have died before having children, the name thing also bothered me, If Hamilton was the girls maiden name then her descendant shouldn't be Hamilton unless she had a son out of wedlock. Other than those two things this is interesting
1/30/2005 c11 93Nienyalie
Awesome story. Such a remorseful ending.
7/23/2004 c11 4Ari-fm-yk
That is great. Not long enough. SEQUEL SEQUEL! I am going to add to to favortie Author's. Maybe once I type it, you can read my book/trilogy thing. It's long already. Once agan Verruh Good
5/16/2004 c11 kate molly anders
great story very good writing you should write more storys cuz man are you good at it.
4/21/2004 c11 2Misses Monkey 13
wow that was amazing im gonna reccomend it 2 all my friends cuz they luv stuff about vampires! please keep writing!
Misses Monkey
4/15/2004 c4 fragmented blue
I don't think I need to repeat anything, but it's a nice, yet short, chapter. Grub is a typical little brother. ^_^
4/15/2004 c3 fragmented blue
Nice chapter. Still some spelling mistakes. John is funny.
4/15/2004 c2 fragmented blue
Kate sounds a bit shallow...But, using spellcheck wouldn't kill you either. You have some spelling mistakes here.
4/15/2004 c1 fragmented blue
I don't mean to sound harsh, but you need to do research on the 1700's. There was no police force back then, therefore no sherrifs. Your story is a bit too modern for the time line as well. Well, anyway, the first chapter is too modern for the timeline.
3/17/2004 c11 12Insanity Da Best Policy
*Ahem* I take my last chance to tell you that this fiction was marvellous! Really fantastic. For a minute I thought she'd become Vampire too ... but it didn't happen. Poor Kate.
He *was* in love with her right? I know I'm always right *smug grin* Ok maybe not always but still ... there isn't any harm boasting! Or is there...?
1/23/2004 c2 pastlemouth
but how could the girl be her great something grandmother if she was only 17 when she died?
12/30/2003 c1 54Werecat99
I liked that. A bit gory, but I always liked gore and horror, hehe.
4/24/2003 c9 20Xelena
in her mind? as in she hearing her brother's voice? nice chapter
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