for The Phoenix4/1/2003 c1 the jesus that doesn't love you
wooho! jeez! that was a good chap!
You've really improved in your descriptiveness, and it sounds like an old storybook or something. yeah.
well...i want to hear more about Svanti, cause I'm really curious to know exactly what a Magyu'za is.
I really really really think you shouldn't dump this story Ally, i think it'll be summat big!
(and, if you ditch it, i'll be super angry at you)
this story has a lot of suspense, and really makes you curios as to what's going to happen next:):)
good job! kep writing!
wo0T!
(look at those ping-pong skills;)
wooho! jeez! that was a good chap!
You've really improved in your descriptiveness, and it sounds like an old storybook or something. yeah.
well...i want to hear more about Svanti, cause I'm really curious to know exactly what a Magyu'za is.
I really really really think you shouldn't dump this story Ally, i think it'll be summat big!
(and, if you ditch it, i'll be super angry at you)
this story has a lot of suspense, and really makes you curios as to what's going to happen next:):)
good job! kep writing!
wo0T!
(look at those ping-pong skills;)
3/24/2003 c1 Roseblood Rain
I really like this story. It looks like it's going to be long, which is good. I hope you plan on continuing it. I think you should write that prologue. I'd like to know more about Pan. Please update soon.
I really like this story. It looks like it's going to be long, which is good. I hope you plan on continuing it. I think you should write that prologue. I'd like to know more about Pan. Please update soon.
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