for Religious Place I Notre Dame, Monument of history10/11/2003 c1 The Black Rider
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9/14/2003 c1 
19Morncreek
Well-written. I like the last stanza best. For some reason, it just makes my imagination go.
19MorncreekWell-written. I like the last stanza best. For some reason, it just makes my imagination go.
4/30/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
that was PHENOMENAL! you know, i've always wanted to see notre dame in person - what better way to go than to read princess mulan's poetry? it's a lovely piece, dahling. everything's great. the builders in the beginning made for a great start - kinda felt like i WAS a builder for a minute there. :P really enjoyed the "Church of Notre Dame . . . very magical" stanza. partly because of it's beautiful imagery, and partly because of the way it interrupted the format at a perfect time: transition from creation to existance. brilliant. fantastic description with the "statues and gargoyles/ornaments and stained glass/a gothic marvel" stanza. LOVED the allusion to Heraclius ("where Heraclius/calls for his crusade"). i loved all the rest of the allusions to historical figures, too, but heraclius just stood out for some reason. and the last stanza . . . "treasure chest of art/home of history, muse of tales/the great Notre Dame' . . . EXQUISITE. dynamite conclusion. this piece ROCKS! i can't wait to read the other two! gotta go grab dinner first, though (stupid grumbling stomach. grr). be back soon! INCREDIBLE job!
8glitterjewelethat was PHENOMENAL! you know, i've always wanted to see notre dame in person - what better way to go than to read princess mulan's poetry? it's a lovely piece, dahling. everything's great. the builders in the beginning made for a great start - kinda felt like i WAS a builder for a minute there. :P really enjoyed the "Church of Notre Dame . . . very magical" stanza. partly because of it's beautiful imagery, and partly because of the way it interrupted the format at a perfect time: transition from creation to existance. brilliant. fantastic description with the "statues and gargoyles/ornaments and stained glass/a gothic marvel" stanza. LOVED the allusion to Heraclius ("where Heraclius/calls for his crusade"). i loved all the rest of the allusions to historical figures, too, but heraclius just stood out for some reason. and the last stanza . . . "treasure chest of art/home of history, muse of tales/the great Notre Dame' . . . EXQUISITE. dynamite conclusion. this piece ROCKS! i can't wait to read the other two! gotta go grab dinner first, though (stupid grumbling stomach. grr). be back soon! INCREDIBLE job!
4/14/2003 c1 89Lyria Shard
I seriosuly enjoyed this series, being married in notre dame would be so cool!]
Sal
89Lyria ShardI seriosuly enjoyed this series, being married in notre dame would be so cool!]
Sal
4/6/2003 c1 39Kesshi Mashin
What a strange muse it is. ^_~ Mind sharing it once in awhile? *laughs*
Another well done haiku. Keep on churnin' them out!
39Kesshi MashinWhat a strange muse it is. ^_~ Mind sharing it once in awhile? *laughs*
Another well done haiku. Keep on churnin' them out!
4/3/2003 c1 18Lexa
Beautiful! I've never been to Notre Dame or France at all, but if I ever do, I'm sure to remember your poem... you know a lot of art, and how to catch it into words. It's always a impressive feeling to stand in front of a centuries old church and think of the people who put their hearts and lifes into building it... the soul the old god's houses were build with. I love churches not only for religious reasons, but for this reason, too.
18LexaBeautiful! I've never been to Notre Dame or France at all, but if I ever do, I'm sure to remember your poem... you know a lot of art, and how to catch it into words. It's always a impressive feeling to stand in front of a centuries old church and think of the people who put their hearts and lifes into building it... the soul the old god's houses were build with. I love churches not only for religious reasons, but for this reason, too.
3/28/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Lol, muses love to play tricks on authors, ne? Another lovely poem. I've always wanted to visit Notre Dame. Anyway, keep it up.~CT
43Carter TachikawaLol, muses love to play tricks on authors, ne? Another lovely poem. I've always wanted to visit Notre Dame. Anyway, keep it up.~CT
3/26/2003 c1 64not sure yet
interesting and beautifully done, extremely well written with excellent imagry, nicely done
64not sure yetinteresting and beautifully done, extremely well written with excellent imagry, nicely done
3/25/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
I think your muse just gave a very brilliant idea indeed! I always love history more than anything else and this has certainly enlighten me. Thank you.
36Psycho-kyugurlI think your muse just gave a very brilliant idea indeed! I always love history more than anything else and this has certainly enlighten me. Thank you.
3/24/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
Wow, I've learnt a lot from reading this Haiku. Thanks for posting it up. Hehe.
DW
28ChaoxAngelWow, I've learnt a lot from reading this Haiku. Thanks for posting it up. Hehe.
DW
3/24/2003 c1 48Liz Huisman
Wow! Thanks for sharing that, that was wonderful. I learned a bit, too... never a bad thing!
48Liz HuismanWow! Thanks for sharing that, that was wonderful. I learned a bit, too... never a bad thing!