for My POV during PE8/21/2003 c1 Evangeline
SPORTS ARE EVIL I TELLS YA! but you allready knew that or you wouldnt have written this ^^ anyways... this is good stuff! You should be a writer...well...if you get over that´-"never-finish-a-story" part...lol
SPORTS ARE EVIL I TELLS YA! but you allready knew that or you wouldnt have written this ^^ anyways... this is good stuff! You should be a writer...well...if you get over that´-"never-finish-a-story" part...lol
4/19/2003 c1 
3Battle Axe Warrior
I like gym. I guess everyone has their own opinion. I can't see why you wouldn't like it. *shrugs* This haiku was ok, I guess...
3Battle Axe WarriorI like gym. I guess everyone has their own opinion. I can't see why you wouldn't like it. *shrugs* This haiku was ok, I guess...
4/10/2003 c1 5theshiz
Just one thing: lay off the ellipses! No offense... (see! I use them too!) just too many of them all together like that drives me crazy. Other then that, it's amazing. Reminds me of "Myron the Nazi," the trainer at my school. I hate that man. My favorite part is the one that begins "running around in." Keep up the good work.
5theshizJust one thing: lay off the ellipses! No offense... (see! I use them too!) just too many of them all together like that drives me crazy. Other then that, it's amazing. Reminds me of "Myron the Nazi," the trainer at my school. I hate that man. My favorite part is the one that begins "running around in." Keep up the good work.
3/24/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
LOL the ending is very good!
You did such a good job showing your emotions.
I like your Haiku
68Princess MulanLOL the ending is very good!
You did such a good job showing your emotions.
I like your Haiku