for Take Me Free5/15/2003 c1 sye
good and ...
good and ...
5/14/2003 c1 
100Keep it 100
That was really great! I agree with the others when they say that this has a great flow to it.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100That was really great! I agree with the others when they say that this has a great flow to it.
~Heart of the Sword
5/7/2003 c1 SecretSweetness
Good, very good... that sounds a lot like something I would write too =) I love your poetry, keep it up
Good, very good... that sounds a lot like something I would write too =) I love your poetry, keep it up
5/7/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
M, pretty good. I like it. Good topic... :) Some spelling thingeys... but hey! :)
Keep writing,
Vnomi. ;)
72CancerianQueenM, pretty good. I like it. Good topic... :) Some spelling thingeys... but hey! :)
Keep writing,
Vnomi. ;)
5/4/2003 c1 30LittleMaggie
Oh, that was beautiful. I read it 3 times. It's got the most gorgeous flow to it.
30LittleMaggieOh, that was beautiful. I read it 3 times. It's got the most gorgeous flow to it.
4/19/2003 c1 32Lounalune
It's so sad and beautiful, I really don't know what else I can say. Amazing.
32LounaluneIt's so sad and beautiful, I really don't know what else I can say. Amazing.
4/4/2003 c1 1e. riley
Sad and very well written. "Take Me Free" is a great title. I likes it, precious.
Hey, you reviewed my story "My Dearest Rachel." The third chapter's up if you want to see it. It might be pathetic. :)
always, me
1e. rileySad and very well written. "Take Me Free" is a great title. I likes it, precious.
Hey, you reviewed my story "My Dearest Rachel." The third chapter's up if you want to see it. It might be pathetic. :)
always, me
3/25/2003 c1 May
The poem is good but there are some grammar errors. Maybe you should write more. :)
The poem is good but there are some grammar errors. Maybe you should write more. :)
3/25/2003 c1 5Nonki
" She's searching for a man
And all she can find is only a can "
I like this phrase...dunno why coz I just found myself mentally reciting it over and over again...haha.
err...A little suggestion though (dun mind?).
perhaps it would sound better if you put
'There she is, crying'
instead of
'There is she, crying'...
Anyway, just keep writing! ^_^
5Nonki" She's searching for a man
And all she can find is only a can "
I like this phrase...dunno why coz I just found myself mentally reciting it over and over again...haha.
err...A little suggestion though (dun mind?).
perhaps it would sound better if you put
'There she is, crying'
instead of
'There is she, crying'...
Anyway, just keep writing! ^_^