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2/26/2006 c1 25Guenevere Lee
First and foremost, it's spelled 'Doyle'. *LOL*

Secondly: "Planet 288 D. Apparently, and kind of ironic considering where I'm from, an asteroid the size of Texas had crashed into it hundreds of years ago, and wiped out all life on it." That's not irony, that's just bad luck.

Well, a good start to the story and I don't want to point out a bunch of bad stuff so I'll tell you that it's a very interesting beginning and it makes people want to read more. That's key and most people aren't able to do that, so keep up the good work.
7/12/2005 c1 15lioness2004
I absolutely loved it! If you keep writing I'll keep reading! I can't wait for the next posting!
5/22/2003 c1 2Sobansa
Good, Give me more before I change in to a being of pure enrgy.
12/3/2000 c1 Azrel
Hey, get the next part up fast! Ya got a good plotline going, though you need to fix some grammical and spelling errors. Otherwise, GOOD! ^_~
11/30/2000 c1 1Meidara

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