for Opening Eyes4/29/2003 c1 Glastonbury
Good use of language, its descriptive and i think thats what makes a good poem stand out. Thanks for reviewing me, you've got me on the lookout now for poets that think suicide is a chickens way out...
Anyway good job.
Good use of language, its descriptive and i think thats what makes a good poem stand out. Thanks for reviewing me, you've got me on the lookout now for poets that think suicide is a chickens way out...
Anyway good job.
4/25/2003 c1 
1Tenshi-Usa
yah! one that's not completely focused on death! (just kiddin'! i happen to like that kind of peom!) I really like this one! Ei- and no ryming this one.
1Tenshi-Usayah! one that's not completely focused on death! (just kiddin'! i happen to like that kind of peom!) I really like this one! Ei- and no ryming this one.