for Hidden Images6/26/2009 c3 MockingJuliet
Wow. Every line kept me drooling for more. Amazing job. You write very well. I'm seeing great potential, so keep writing. ^ ^
Wow. Every line kept me drooling for more. Amazing job. You write very well. I'm seeing great potential, so keep writing. ^ ^
9/12/2004 c1 Nck
Good opening chapter. Interesting events and I like the way the story is narrated. As though its second person but also her thoughts.
Good opening chapter. Interesting events and I like the way the story is narrated. As though its second person but also her thoughts.
4/9/2003 c3 
8PaperLanterns
Good lord, that was great! you do such a spifftastical job of building tension i'm in awe...honestly. i don't know who to trust now, i don't think i trust a single person in the story...especially not holly. But frankly..whoever the murderer is should be thrown in the loony bin! straight-jacket and all! lol
8PaperLanternsGood lord, that was great! you do such a spifftastical job of building tension i'm in awe...honestly. i don't know who to trust now, i don't think i trust a single person in the story...especially not holly. But frankly..whoever the murderer is should be thrown in the loony bin! straight-jacket and all! lol
4/1/2003 c2 PaperLanterns
Holy shit is this 'mystery person' deranged or what? well done, as always...my suspicions and mistrust of Kasey are fading away slowly...God this thing is creepy and almost disturbing because i'm bothered by the fact that i haven't a fucking clue who the murderer is.
love,
andrea
Holy shit is this 'mystery person' deranged or what? well done, as always...my suspicions and mistrust of Kasey are fading away slowly...God this thing is creepy and almost disturbing because i'm bothered by the fact that i haven't a fucking clue who the murderer is.
love,
andrea
3/27/2003 c1 PaperLanterns
Great first Chapter. It was a good introduction to all teh characters and the foreshadowing for the rest of the story worked well. Can't wait to see what happens next!
love,
Andrea
Great first Chapter. It was a good introduction to all teh characters and the foreshadowing for the rest of the story worked well. Can't wait to see what happens next!
love,
Andrea
3/26/2003 c1 Bitter Berry
Very interesting. This has a lot of potential. More soon, I hope. ^^
-Bitter B.
Very interesting. This has a lot of potential. More soon, I hope. ^^
-Bitter B.