for Two12/18/2003 c1 
10AngelaiR
I usualy am not the type for "mushy" poetry, but I did like this one. I like your thoughts and wording skills. I also liked how the poem sounded. Good poem, I like it.
10AngelaiRI usualy am not the type for "mushy" poetry, but I did like this one. I like your thoughts and wording skills. I also liked how the poem sounded. Good poem, I like it.
8/8/2003 c1 23MaiaMadness
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L ! ! ! !
Very nice! I love the style of this poem! It's really lovely!
^_^ ReiChan
23MaiaMadnessB-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L ! ! ! !
Very nice! I love the style of this poem! It's really lovely!
^_^ ReiChan
3/28/2003 c1 Forfirith
oh! I'm all a flutter now! beautiful! well, I'm off 2 review you're other poems... :-)
oh! I'm all a flutter now! beautiful! well, I'm off 2 review you're other poems... :-)
3/27/2003 c1 4Numitor
Absoloutely beautiful. Very vivid, without being overly explicit... very realistic... very good!
4NumitorAbsoloutely beautiful. Very vivid, without being overly explicit... very realistic... very good!
3/26/2003 c1 Ariel
Thats really beautiful! It's so truthfull too. We all think that about that special someone!
Gongrats!
Keep writing
Thats really beautiful! It's so truthfull too. We all think that about that special someone!
Gongrats!
Keep writing
3/26/2003 c1 43musicluver
it was really vivid...i felt like i was intruding in on something...i love it so much!
43musicluverit was really vivid...i felt like i was intruding in on something...i love it so much!