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5/13/2004 c1 S.O.S.water
hey, i like this poem a lot!
7/11/2003 c1 1liquor knight
very good m-dear! no honestly, i liked this one. The 'you just didn't care' oh man, that was nice!

happiness is not all around. nice poem!
6/14/2003 c1 7Aberration Effect
I've been reading your works and I must say that they have all been enjoyable and are very well written. Keep up the great writings!
6/13/2003 c1 20Lilly Nilly
Hey I like the way this poem sounds.

~Lilly~
6/5/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
This is great!
6/2/2003 c1 28tahayov
another short,realistic and stunning poem.i love it too!i love ur talent
5/28/2003 c1 8RavenPhoenix
*formerly Cinnamon13*

Well, well, It looks like i didnt review any of your stuff :O im sorry. Call me mean if you want! Well this is awesome! Keep up the GREAT work! And thnx for the review :):):)

~*RavenPhoenix*~
5/22/2003 c1 Kyalia
Keep writing poems. You're too good to stop.
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
Very sad... somehow it reminds me of a person dying...

~Isay
4/25/2003 c1 14wintumn
wow i really liked this poem keep writing! it was really good!
4/22/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
Wow! So powerful! I love the ending line, 'And you just didn't care' It just reminds me of... don't worry! ;) Anyways... THAT WAS SO GOOD! :D

Vnomi. ;)
4/20/2003 c1 64not sure yet
interesting, short but again powerful and full of meaning, love the ending, excellent job
4/9/2003 c1 39Kurare
Oh... very nice. I like the rhyme, it suits the style and the words. Great.
4/6/2003 c1 3Angerona
It's very nice. I like a message. Good work. :D
4/4/2003 c1 41Sojiro
Hi! I liked the way you were able to create a picture with rhyme...I'm not able to do that without it sounding silly ^_^
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