for Holidome7/28/2003 c2 
47myfishpajamas
Excellent, excellent, excellent. There really is no point to me reviewing anymore since I love everything you write. But just for the record, it was excellent.
47myfishpajamasExcellent, excellent, excellent. There really is no point to me reviewing anymore since I love everything you write. But just for the record, it was excellent.
4/9/2003 c2 11Lya S
excellent chapter ...
adriana is a really interesting character, and id like to see what happens next.
oh, btw, thanks for that review on every secret. mannered? yes, i guess you're right. buts that the style im kinda going for.
11Lya Sexcellent chapter ...
adriana is a really interesting character, and id like to see what happens next.
oh, btw, thanks for that review on every secret. mannered? yes, i guess you're right. buts that the style im kinda going for.
4/9/2003 c2 6Nickchick
Interesting start. I hope you continue with this. Adriana and Tyler seem the most intriguing characters. I hope you develop them more. Your style works well with the subject and starting off with a suicide is a very powerful way to begin.
Thank you for reviewing my story and I'll take your comments into considerations when I edit. I'll check out some of your other works too.
6NickchickInteresting start. I hope you continue with this. Adriana and Tyler seem the most intriguing characters. I hope you develop them more. Your style works well with the subject and starting off with a suicide is a very powerful way to begin.
Thank you for reviewing my story and I'll take your comments into considerations when I edit. I'll check out some of your other works too.
4/2/2003 c1 11Lya S
yo there. thanks for that review. i appreciated ur comments ... altho i'm having a problem with my father character, just like u said.
it is TOO easy to make him a pure asshole, cos he's a really angry dude.
anyway, about your story ... hmm.. you seem to be a little on the somewhat morbid side haha ... but u are a good writer. and im interested in this one. pls post more.
11Lya Syo there. thanks for that review. i appreciated ur comments ... altho i'm having a problem with my father character, just like u said.
it is TOO easy to make him a pure asshole, cos he's a really angry dude.
anyway, about your story ... hmm.. you seem to be a little on the somewhat morbid side haha ... but u are a good writer. and im interested in this one. pls post more.