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12/20/2003 c2 4Inflexible Motives
more! Its very interesting. I like it.
6/24/2003 c2 15pinkdragon
Well, I must say that you cover quite the cornucopia of vices in your stories. I don't really remember why I picked this one to read, but I liked it. Chapter one started out kinda boring and lazy, but the end woke me with a start. This makes an awesome contrast. I like the way your character reflects almost sentimentally in this chapter. I am looking forward to reading more of this story. I will be coming back to read other stories, as I have other obligations currently.
3/27/2003 c1 Sicilienne
I thoroughly enjoyed the imagery in the prologue/first chapter of this story, particularly in the opening paragraph in which you describe the house. It's very organic, as though the house were its own person. And though this mainly serves as a descriptive passage, you manage to hook readers with your concluding paragraph. Definitely a good cliffhanger. Hopefully you won't leave me waiting for too long until the next chapter.


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