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3/27/2005 c7 6Double Entendre
This isn't childish at all! It's actually quite beautiful. I adore it.
6/15/2003 c7 156Jazzista
this whole collection is superb. you capture the connection of nature and freedom and God's creation very well. I can see these places, thank you for allowing me to take part in the wonderful world you have created.
5/11/2003 c7 100Keep it 100
Incredible work! This was written beautifully.

~Heart of the Sword
4/22/2003 c6 68Princess Mulan
We have an exam like that, too. I know how you feel. A lot of students actually commited suicide because of the pressure. This is busy months for children psychologists in HK.

I will pray for you. I know you'll do wonderful cause you're really intellectual. I hope for all the best for you. You deserve nothing less.

I will pray for you

this poem is simply beautiful. I love the beauty of the flowers in this one. So poetic and magical. So spiritual lifting. You take me to happiness.

very lovely place. I hope I can go there and play with you. YOu're such a wonderful writer,
4/11/2003 c6 100Keep it 100
I can relate to the "lots of tests" thing. I'm going through the same thing too. It will be nice when summer comes and I can relax in the flowers.

~Heart of the Sword
4/6/2003 c5 Keep it 100
I can really see this in my mind. Grass flowing like waves as wind washes over the field. So beautiful.

~Heart of the Sword
4/6/2003 c5 68Princess Mulan
This is a really nice poem again, so lovely. I love it a lot.

The Prairie is so green and lovely, so fill with freedom.

*lying down in grasses, watching the sky happily.*

This is so relaxing. So warm and wonderful.

Don't worry about the cave poem, I just got over excited. Wherever we are going is fine. I just have strange obssession with caves and rocks...

Take it easy and good luck with your exam, okay? I wish all the best for you, for you deserve nothing less
4/3/2003 c4 100Keep it 100
These are turning out to really great. Keep it up.

~Heart of the Sword
4/3/2003 c4 68Princess Mulan
Out of the forest and into the waterfall!

HOw nice, I like the "shortness" of the as compare to the others, It gives the waterfall a sense of "rush" and "power". So strong this picture is. I never see a waterfall either, but I read how powerful it is. There is a powerhouse under Nigrarga fall that supples the electricity of Canada!

So powerful. It is amazing.

Where are you gonna take me next? I love to see caves...with all those lovely shapred rocks? Another place I've never been to.

Wish to see you write something about into a cave.

Great, great writing. I really love how poetic you are. very sentual.

I love the feel.
4/3/2003 c3 Princess Mulan
Now we area taking a walk into the green forest!

*feel so lucky to know you, so I can travel to these wonderful place*

I love how sacred the place, so purifying, so filled with life.

I wish I can really go into a forest. There are no deep green forest in HK, only buildings everywhere #_#

I wish I can actually get lose in a giant forest and see all the animals.
4/3/2003 c2 Princess Mulan
Another lovely place!

Thanks for letting me into your wonderful light house.

When I was a very young kid, I use to wish I can live inside a light house. I want to buy a light house when I grow up, and remodel it into a home so I can look at junk and ferry everyday.

Silly me, huh?

Another very soul touching place. I like being in there
4/3/2003 c1 Princess Mulan
Hi, truelyshine,

I hope everything is okay with you. I heard WHO (world Health organization) isn't going to go to Taiwan...

Well, they can't really do anything anyhow...the WHO French doctor in Vietnam die of SAR already.

They aren't even coming close with a cure.

*sigh*

Talk too much again. I really like this poem! I love castles, and I really enjoy reading your poem on it. Your poems is so detailed, I can see the whole wonderful castle in front of my eyes. So nice and peaceful, yet so beautiful.

*close my eyes and imagine me sitting in the lovely castle.* smile...this is so nice.

Great writing.
3/31/2003 c3 100Keep it 100
You should do some drawings to go along with these. I bet they'd be great.

~Heart of the Sword
3/28/2003 c2 Keep it 100
Awesome. That compairison to friendship was great.

~Heart of the Sword
3/28/2003 c1 Keep it 100
That sounds really great!

~Heart of the Sword

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