12/18/2003 c1 10AngelaiR
Oh I like how you take other's thoughts and your own opinions forming it into a poem, well written.
Oh I like how you take other's thoughts and your own opinions forming it into a poem, well written.
8/8/2003 c1 23MaiaMadness
This is very good. I somehow liked this better than It's Not Fair... Well, if you've read my review, you'll understand.
A very simple poem. Simply written, and yet it holds so much meaning. I like it a lot! Five gold stars!
^_^ ReiChan
This is very good. I somehow liked this better than It's Not Fair... Well, if you've read my review, you'll understand.
A very simple poem. Simply written, and yet it holds so much meaning. I like it a lot! Five gold stars!
^_^ ReiChan
3/29/2003 c1 Ariel
Nice insight. I like the repetition of it all, and the last verse is cool. You seem to end on strong notes.
Good job, kepp writing.
Nice insight. I like the repetition of it all, and the last verse is cool. You seem to end on strong notes.
Good job, kepp writing.
3/29/2003 c1 Forfirith
Wow... I wonder what death really 8is* like? Very morbid subject, but a really good poem all the same! :-)
Wow... I wonder what death really 8is* like? Very morbid subject, but a really good poem all the same! :-)