for Firecracker7/29/2003 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Some of the punctuation you use confuses me a bit at certain parts of the story, but other than that it's awesome. Very well written and I keep on thinking of Ray Bradbury crossed with J.D. Salinger. (I get the Ray Bradbury from the flow of the piece and J.D. Salinger from the actual style). Great job; I'll need to come back and check out your other stories.
~Jess
Some of the punctuation you use confuses me a bit at certain parts of the story, but other than that it's awesome. Very well written and I keep on thinking of Ray Bradbury crossed with J.D. Salinger. (I get the Ray Bradbury from the flow of the piece and J.D. Salinger from the actual style). Great job; I'll need to come back and check out your other stories.
~Jess