for Randomness9/15/2003 c1 Holy Soldier
I understand what you mean by the title being random. Was a random subject poem. Some of the lines when they were supposed to ryhme. But poem was still on course with the subject.
I understand what you mean by the title being random. Was a random subject poem. Some of the lines when they were supposed to ryhme. But poem was still on course with the subject.
7/27/2003 c1 
2FoolishBeloved
for just half an hour thats pretty damn good, i only ever tried poetry twice, they both took forever and still sucked
loki ^_^
2FoolishBelovedfor just half an hour thats pretty damn good, i only ever tried poetry twice, they both took forever and still sucked
loki ^_^
5/24/2003 c1 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
Hey, i felt like reviewing one of yours so i reviewed this poem. I like it, it's kinda funny is some parts and its very original.
P.s I'm looking forward to the plushie fic LOL i could use a little humor with TUD being somewhat agnsty. And i read your reveiw on Lazey's and i just have to comment.
I was talking to her and asked if there might be a possible romance between her and Kedem. Well it turns out Kedem is QUITE old she said (in human years) he'd be around 50 and Rye's not even that. Although she wouldn't comment about the other dog fox. HEhe anyways keep going.
-Belle the Shadow-cat
6Belle the Shadow-CatHey, i felt like reviewing one of yours so i reviewed this poem. I like it, it's kinda funny is some parts and its very original.
P.s I'm looking forward to the plushie fic LOL i could use a little humor with TUD being somewhat agnsty. And i read your reveiw on Lazey's and i just have to comment.
I was talking to her and asked if there might be a possible romance between her and Kedem. Well it turns out Kedem is QUITE old she said (in human years) he'd be around 50 and Rye's not even that. Although she wouldn't comment about the other dog fox. HEhe anyways keep going.
-Belle the Shadow-cat
5/22/2003 c1 7Fans'R Us
Wow! You wrote that in thirty minutes? I couldn't write that in 3 hours. That was really good. Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate them. No, the story your reading isn't the one that sucks. If I put it on here you would laugh at it too. I don't even know where it is right now. Thanks again for reading my only masterpiece right now. I like it so much I won't ever give it up.
7Fans'R UsWow! You wrote that in thirty minutes? I couldn't write that in 3 hours. That was really good. Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate them. No, the story your reading isn't the one that sucks. If I put it on here you would laugh at it too. I don't even know where it is right now. Thanks again for reading my only masterpiece right now. I like it so much I won't ever give it up.
5/15/2003 c1 Ayen
You can bring light in your life
Or just pierce your heart with a knife
But remember just one thing...
The world is one lousy thing.
It's not worth your life
Don't waste it.
You can bring light in your life
Or just pierce your heart with a knife
But remember just one thing...
The world is one lousy thing.
It's not worth your life
Don't waste it.
5/13/2003 c1 187Andaren
I like this, exactly how I feel most of the time, lol!
p.s, thanx 4 the review...I should hopefully have chapter two up really soon. I have actually finished the book but it is taking some time to redraft and post.
p.p.s there are dragons in it ;)
187AndarenI like this, exactly how I feel most of the time, lol!
p.s, thanx 4 the review...I should hopefully have chapter two up really soon. I have actually finished the book but it is taking some time to redraft and post.
p.p.s there are dragons in it ;)
4/25/2003 c1 7Xero Maverick
Very nice work.
At first, it's surreal. You're placed in an atmosphere where you are viewing the writer's thoughts and nothing else. Then, suddenly, you are whisked into a physical, symbolic world where you watch the writer battle with himself - his thoughts. Nice how the transition was made. When you don't notice it happening, it was made very smoothly.
Excellent work.
7Xero MaverickVery nice work.
At first, it's surreal. You're placed in an atmosphere where you are viewing the writer's thoughts and nothing else. Then, suddenly, you are whisked into a physical, symbolic world where you watch the writer battle with himself - his thoughts. Nice how the transition was made. When you don't notice it happening, it was made very smoothly.
Excellent work.
3/29/2003 c1 Nickel City
Wow! This was so good! It ryhmed to! (sprry bout the spelling there) it was great! One of the best poems I have ever read! (I know I say that at a lot to many different people but, hey, they just keep getting better) you write so well! you write so, beautifly, it is amazing. No words to describe this...wow..
-Nickel City
ps. I got your e-mail through my website one, and I replied but I don't think you got it yet. But just to tell you and let you know!
Wow! This was so good! It ryhmed to! (sprry bout the spelling there) it was great! One of the best poems I have ever read! (I know I say that at a lot to many different people but, hey, they just keep getting better) you write so well! you write so, beautifly, it is amazing. No words to describe this...wow..
-Nickel City
ps. I got your e-mail through my website one, and I replied but I don't think you got it yet. But just to tell you and let you know!