for To Reach Out Over Blurred Lines5/12/2003 c1 
32Arietti
*claps* NICE one DA! Once again, I love the way you write, and how you put so much emotion into your poems! Good good job! Keep up the good work!
~Ari
32Arietti*claps* NICE one DA! Once again, I love the way you write, and how you put so much emotion into your poems! Good good job! Keep up the good work!
~Ari
5/4/2003 c1 39Kesshi Mashin
Sugoi... I'm at a loss for words... *clicks fav. story button* ^_^ Is good! Keep on writin!
39Kesshi MashinSugoi... I'm at a loss for words... *clicks fav. story button* ^_^ Is good! Keep on writin!
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
Lovely poem! And it had such a perfect ending line too...
Good job!
*claps*
~Isay
15IsayLovely poem! And it had such a perfect ending line too...
Good job!
*claps*
~Isay
4/18/2003 c1 16Voodoo Fyrefly
I found this beautifully melancholy, a wonderful little anaesthetic, for I feel numb now. But it's a good numbness. You are an amazing poet, Dream Angel
~TIO
16Voodoo FyreflyI found this beautifully melancholy, a wonderful little anaesthetic, for I feel numb now. But it's a good numbness. You are an amazing poet, Dream Angel
~TIO
4/5/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Aw, such a pretty poem. Love the imagery. It's been so long since I last heard from you and I'm so glad to see you've uploaded something new. Anyway, keep it up. Excellent poem.~CT
43Carter TachikawaAw, such a pretty poem. Love the imagery. It's been so long since I last heard from you and I'm so glad to see you've uploaded something new. Anyway, keep it up. Excellent poem.~CT
3/30/2003 c1 Surrealeyes
YES! Quite possibly the best poem i''ve seen on this site. great title, especially hit me at the beginning, :)
YES! Quite possibly the best poem i''ve seen on this site. great title, especially hit me at the beginning, :)
3/29/2003 c1 25Blue6-Blood66
i liked these lines: "and I realize that your songs only intensify the grief
after you do not reach out
for the lines are perhaps not so blurred after all"
makes me go curious about the deep meaning...
anyhoo, great job! nice work!
25Blue6-Blood66i liked these lines: "and I realize that your songs only intensify the grief
after you do not reach out
for the lines are perhaps not so blurred after all"
makes me go curious about the deep meaning...
anyhoo, great job! nice work!
3/28/2003 c1 5shakespeareinlove86
Good poem loved it! If you want check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!
5shakespeareinlove86Good poem loved it! If you want check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!