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5/30/2003 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow, that was really good! It had such description and it really moved me! keep writing these!
5/1/2003 c1 Soul of Frodo
O.O It's rhymed, it's metered, and it has actual coherent content! *falls over in shock*Incredible! My only decent rhyming poetry is either sappy songs or nonsense! *worships*
4/29/2003 c1 36Windsong
Wow! This poem is so...inspiring! As usual, I have such a blast reading your writing style, it's so beautiful, and you have a real gift for writing ^-^. And now I feel so optimistic and cheerful! Keep writing, please! -Windy-chan ^^
4/23/2003 c1 3Ahrihliir
This is fantastic. It really gives you cause to think about our journey in life, and for me it really summarizes Christianity. I have goosebumps. I don't know if you were going for rhythym or not, but I think you could work on the flow a little.
3/30/2003 c1 Needa S
Awesome job!
3/29/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Great job!

~Heart of the Sword

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