for Pastel colors1/7/2004 c1 
107A. Bush
I am not sure what to say, except exquisite, beautiful, divinely brilliant, are not near enough praise.
107A. BushI am not sure what to say, except exquisite, beautiful, divinely brilliant, are not near enough praise.
10/28/2003 c1 12kalariah
You mind-influencer, you.
You're right, you know-life is vibrantly colored, but death is like faded reds and blues. Pastels. Washed out. I really like this part:
For life is what governs
Life is what gives
Life is what measures
Life is what lives
And the ending, too:
But life is opposed to the alternative:
Death.
Keep up the excellent work!
12kalariahYou mind-influencer, you.
You're right, you know-life is vibrantly colored, but death is like faded reds and blues. Pastels. Washed out. I really like this part:
For life is what governs
Life is what gives
Life is what measures
Life is what lives
And the ending, too:
But life is opposed to the alternative:
Death.
Keep up the excellent work!
7/2/2003 c1 5Adenosine Triphosphate
It was good ryming at first but it went off beat and off ryme at times. If you decide to make a ryming poem, then stick to the ryming.
-Ari
P.S. Leave crazymax alone. She writes nicely.
5Adenosine TriphosphateIt was good ryming at first but it went off beat and off ryme at times. If you decide to make a ryming poem, then stick to the ryming.
-Ari
P.S. Leave crazymax alone. She writes nicely.
3/31/2003 c1 22MadMorrow
That's a really powerful poem. At first I wasn't sure if you were talking about a specific 'she' or something more abstract - I still might be wrong.
But I especially like the last few lines:
"Life can breed frailty Life can halt breath
But life is opposed to the alternative:
Death"
22MadMorrowThat's a really powerful poem. At first I wasn't sure if you were talking about a specific 'she' or something more abstract - I still might be wrong.
But I especially like the last few lines:
"Life can breed frailty Life can halt breath
But life is opposed to the alternative:
Death"