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5/16/2004 c1 30a e i o u and sometimes y
Oh, this was so true and pretty.
1/7/2004 c1 107A. Bush
I am not sure what to say, except exquisite, beautiful, divinely brilliant, are not near enough praise.
10/28/2003 c1 12kalariah
You mind-influencer, you.

You're right, you know-life is vibrantly colored, but death is like faded reds and blues. Pastels. Washed out. I really like this part:

For life is what governs

Life is what gives

Life is what measures

Life is what lives

And the ending, too:

But life is opposed to the alternative:

Death.

Keep up the excellent work!
10/21/2003 c1 1Lauren K
Wow-so good! Nothing else to say here but GOOD!

~Kiara
7/2/2003 c1 5Adenosine Triphosphate
It was good ryming at first but it went off beat and off ryme at times. If you decide to make a ryming poem, then stick to the ryming.

-Ari

P.S. Leave crazymax alone. She writes nicely.
5/30/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
very nice... you write some interesting stuff. xbearx
3/31/2003 c1 22MadMorrow
That's a really powerful poem. At first I wasn't sure if you were talking about a specific 'she' or something more abstract - I still might be wrong.

But I especially like the last few lines:

"Life can breed frailty Life can halt breath

But life is opposed to the alternative:

Death"
3/29/2003 c1 40AvaRicE
This is a bloody good poem! I can't believe I haven't seen your stuffs before *_*

And so, so true.

This is going on my favourite stories list.

Keep writing!

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