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1/4/2004 c1 18Falen
I've been in this exact place, so I Can relate. Good job and good luck.
6/27/2003 c1 101wildtenderness
aww,that was beautifully done.it gave me this such sad feeling..i really liked this poem!
5/16/2003 c1 167E. Hisifithith
This is really great! It flows beautifully and the rhyme is awesome! not forced at all! i can relate to this. There's alot of poetry about getting over someone but this one is diff. In a way it's very optimistic and possitive like it's saying "yeah it hurts but I'm gonna make it." nice change from all of the "I can't live without you" stuff out there. anyways, I really like this!

4/19/2003 c1 No Longer Posting Here
...i can relate...way to much...but i still can't let him go. =( good poem
4/19/2003 c1 3nothing123
That was really good. I love how it rhymes and flows so well. I really love the whole thing. I'll add it to my favorites.
3/29/2003 c1 Sarah
I love reading poetry, although I can't write any of it. I can totally relate with your poem. I REALLY liked it.
3/29/2003 c1 Iruka Irahara
Oh my god...how did you do that? YOu just summed up my last three weeks...I even got this new fictionpress account to avoid him...I love him so much...but I want to ignore him so he doesn't hurt me...this poem is so intense..I love it...I think I'm going to cry now..it's perfect...Keep Writing.

3/29/2003 c1 18Mere Little
loved it! omg IT'S REALLY GOOD... See, I can never do really deep poems that rhyme...
3/29/2003 c1 12LilMissMe
i like this, its really conveys your emotion well, and i love the repetition.

very sad, yet sweet.

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