4/25/2003 c1 29MelodyReiterLee
Great job. *sniff* Muscial intruments... good job writing the poem. You definitely got the feelings across.
Great job. *sniff* Muscial intruments... good job writing the poem. You definitely got the feelings across.
4/19/2003 c1 12Corrupt Innocence
that made me cry.. I can't imagine abandoning my flute and bass like that... they're like my friends... Great poem... I like "Run to the Waves" also... Thanks for reviewing my stuff.
that made me cry.. I can't imagine abandoning my flute and bass like that... they're like my friends... Great poem... I like "Run to the Waves" also... Thanks for reviewing my stuff.
3/29/2003 c1 21Miamouse
This really spoke to me. I could picture the cobwebs, it was so poignant.
The end verse was especially good- "we're almost done"
:)
This really spoke to me. I could picture the cobwebs, it was so poignant.
The end verse was especially good- "we're almost done"
:)
3/29/2003 c1 5shakespeareinlove86
Keep up the good work its awesome. If you want check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!
Keep up the good work its awesome. If you want check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!