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4/25/2003 c1 29MelodyReiterLee
Great job. *sniff* Muscial intruments... good job writing the poem. You definitely got the feelings across.
4/19/2003 c1 12Corrupt Innocence
that made me cry.. I can't imagine abandoning my flute and bass like that... they're like my friends... Great poem... I like "Run to the Waves" also... Thanks for reviewing my stuff.
3/29/2003 c1 21Miamouse
This really spoke to me. I could picture the cobwebs, it was so poignant.

The end verse was especially good- "we're almost done"

:)
3/29/2003 c1 5shakespeareinlove86
Keep up the good work its awesome. If you want check out my stories The Legend of the Red Diamond and The Last Grand Duchesses of Russia!
3/29/2003 c1 4Alyzabeth
I like the title, and the line that brings the title in, "except an echo of a song" it's pretty, and true. pretty.

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