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1/25/2009 c1 Jordan Williams
this is good...i liked it...first time reading ur works =)...while reading it i was like, "what's going on? what happened?"...and then the last two words, "why me?"...i was really like "WTHECK HAPPENED!"...you could totally make a kick ass story about this if u wanted to =D...well off to reading ur other works...while im stuck here at work :\
5/16/2003 c1 5Ryu-no-namida
whee hee hee...i know i already read this way back but oh well, i still like it...grrness...nobody's on! i'm so bored, staring at the b-list. pooh..meh..ja ne

~Nikki
4/1/2003 c1 endless dreamer
i thought you did an great job with your "show-not-tell" piece. in a past english class, i also had to do show-not-telling and it caused a lot of frustration for a lot of people because they couldn't think of any vivid verbs in place of 'be' verbs. (i personally thought show-not-telling was fun despite my classmates' opinions because i thought it improved my writing skills greatly.) your choice of words doesn't make it seem awkward, and you make it look easy. good job!

-the e. dreamer

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