for No Other One7/25/2008 c22 janelle
maybe you should get danny to hurt ryan in someway and get him arrested/ or you could get his dad arrested or something like that
maybe you should get danny to hurt ryan in someway and get him arrested/ or you could get his dad arrested or something like that
10/7/2006 c22 xo-pauli-ox
loving it! ideas hmm.. i dnnof or more drama mebbe ushud get danny to hurt ryan physicalli... umm... i actualli dunno lol but guud stori newayupdate soon
loving it! ideas hmm.. i dnnof or more drama mebbe ushud get danny to hurt ryan physicalli... umm... i actualli dunno lol but guud stori newayupdate soon
3/6/2006 c1 
18flying blind
Hey!
I love your story i just read the whole thing in one sitting, which is good because I loved it but bad because I'm so meant to be doing some work...
I really hope you update it.
18flying blindHey!
I love your story i just read the whole thing in one sitting, which is good because I loved it but bad because I'm so meant to be doing some work...
I really hope you update it.
7/28/2005 c22 1littleboots
hey really good umm you need help hm you could do something about ryans dad finding out that he still hangs out with paige and they get into an arguement and something bad happeneds like the dad hurts paige or maybe u could say something like danny trys to rape paige (after ryan gets better) and ryan beats up danny that would be so sweet. Or maybe you can say somebody gets hurt while surfing u know like a shark attack or hitting the reef/rocks well just some ideas hope u like -bridget
1littlebootshey really good umm you need help hm you could do something about ryans dad finding out that he still hangs out with paige and they get into an arguement and something bad happeneds like the dad hurts paige or maybe u could say something like danny trys to rape paige (after ryan gets better) and ryan beats up danny that would be so sweet. Or maybe you can say somebody gets hurt while surfing u know like a shark attack or hitting the reef/rocks well just some ideas hope u like -bridget
7/16/2005 c22 2Twistedangel558
okay, first things first. Tell me where I can buy a guy like Ryan. personally i'd like to see Danny get whats coming to him which is a good ass kicking. I say you just make a chapter based on him and then just eliminate him. I know way to many guys like him and I hate them all. They suck. Maybe you should introduce a new character. Are you even working on this story any more? Well enough of my ramblings. Buh bye - Twisted Angel
2Twistedangel558okay, first things first. Tell me where I can buy a guy like Ryan. personally i'd like to see Danny get whats coming to him which is a good ass kicking. I say you just make a chapter based on him and then just eliminate him. I know way to many guys like him and I hate them all. They suck. Maybe you should introduce a new character. Are you even working on this story any more? Well enough of my ramblings. Buh bye - Twisted Angel
7/7/2005 c22 FictionPressWriter
hope you get over your writers block because i really want to see more of paige and ryan lol
hope you get over your writers block because i really want to see more of paige and ryan lol
6/15/2005 c22 2tinkaleita
it has probably took me 1 hour to read this fic at first i didnt want to cause i thought it would be one of these usual fics that would have a really boring prep thing but i totally loved this story and i really liked ryan's charactar he was totally sweet aswell as Chris and you didnt take paige's prep thing to far she was just perfect i am not really good at this thing usually but you could either finish it there or you could pursue more on the danny stalking and really put Ryan's and Paige's love to the test. But anyway i told you im not very good but when you do decide i cant wait to read it and your story will be good whatever you decide to do.luv Gabziella : )
2tinkaleitait has probably took me 1 hour to read this fic at first i didnt want to cause i thought it would be one of these usual fics that would have a really boring prep thing but i totally loved this story and i really liked ryan's charactar he was totally sweet aswell as Chris and you didnt take paige's prep thing to far she was just perfect i am not really good at this thing usually but you could either finish it there or you could pursue more on the danny stalking and really put Ryan's and Paige's love to the test. But anyway i told you im not very good but when you do decide i cant wait to read it and your story will be good whatever you decide to do.luv Gabziella : )
3/31/2005 c22 18pinkfluffyoranges
well ive got to say although i liked the characters and they way u wrote this story, its the first time were i havent finnished it. it just got very boring so i stopped at about 15, which is sad really coz i was actually enjoying it
18pinkfluffyorangeswell ive got to say although i liked the characters and they way u wrote this story, its the first time were i havent finnished it. it just got very boring so i stopped at about 15, which is sad really coz i was actually enjoying it
1/7/2005 c22 40Moosher
Hey! awsome story you got! Loved it!I was thinking since you mentioned the prom, that maybe you'd go back to that? or is the recovery after the prom? I dont know when you wanna end this ..i have an idea but its definately gonna mean the story will go on for long..school trip?Something happens to his father?preferably Death! the arse!*evil laugh* does n e of this help? heh..well..i hope Kay then...Ciao
40MoosherHey! awsome story you got! Loved it!I was thinking since you mentioned the prom, that maybe you'd go back to that? or is the recovery after the prom? I dont know when you wanna end this ..i have an idea but its definately gonna mean the story will go on for long..school trip?Something happens to his father?preferably Death! the arse!*evil laugh* does n e of this help? heh..well..i hope Kay then...Ciao
8/28/2004 c22 julie
i love ur story, i know its like the end of august but i just found ur story and i love it, please if u check ur reviews please update it.
i love ur story, i know its like the end of august but i just found ur story and i love it, please if u check ur reviews please update it.
6/15/2004 c22 31firewitch1soulwriter
Hey, I know the whole writers block thing sucks, I have found a cure, sappy chick flicks and lots of chocolate. It'll get you right in the mood for writing, least it works for me. I LOVE this story, it's great you could get a novel out of this one. BTW Ryan (hope I spelled it right) sounds like a great guy. Based on a guy you know by any chance?
-Britt ^^
31firewitch1soulwriterHey, I know the whole writers block thing sucks, I have found a cure, sappy chick flicks and lots of chocolate. It'll get you right in the mood for writing, least it works for me. I LOVE this story, it's great you could get a novel out of this one. BTW Ryan (hope I spelled it right) sounds like a great guy. Based on a guy you know by any chance?
-Britt ^^
2/18/2004 c21 One Hard Core Cookie
I absolutely loved this. It was bloody brilliant, although I'd really like to hear about Trisha. Maybe she can device a plan to make Paige break up with Ryan, you know maybe she tells Paige that she slept with Ryan or that Ryan kissed her etc. I would really like to see Ryan have some kind of infatuation with another girl, dont get me wrong it's just that Paige is just so...huh well she is a good character, but that's all she is to me it's probaly because I can't realate to her like I do with Ryan. Since we are both punks and have those kind of parents or 'parent'. I would like to see Ryan do something with his life, you know in the next chapter he's either the best artist or writer and a woman comes to offer him a full scholarship, but the twist is that this woman is one hot babe who has a reputation in exploring young men's trousers (if you get my drift) the rest you can take off on. Keep on writing because I love it. Bloody hell I hate spinach...good day.
I absolutely loved this. It was bloody brilliant, although I'd really like to hear about Trisha. Maybe she can device a plan to make Paige break up with Ryan, you know maybe she tells Paige that she slept with Ryan or that Ryan kissed her etc. I would really like to see Ryan have some kind of infatuation with another girl, dont get me wrong it's just that Paige is just so...huh well she is a good character, but that's all she is to me it's probaly because I can't realate to her like I do with Ryan. Since we are both punks and have those kind of parents or 'parent'. I would like to see Ryan do something with his life, you know in the next chapter he's either the best artist or writer and a woman comes to offer him a full scholarship, but the twist is that this woman is one hot babe who has a reputation in exploring young men's trousers (if you get my drift) the rest you can take off on. Keep on writing because I love it. Bloody hell I hate spinach...good day.
2/11/2004 c20 1ocean-avenue
Hey, i have been askin' for an update for months...so here's a suggestion: How about Ryan and Paige doing a whole prom-thingy, then of course, Ryan says that they should really really get together, and Paige agrees! of course, they kiss, yadda yadda...yep, that one.Cliche, isn't it?
1ocean-avenueHey, i have been askin' for an update for months...so here's a suggestion: How about Ryan and Paige doing a whole prom-thingy, then of course, Ryan says that they should really really get together, and Paige agrees! of course, they kiss, yadda yadda...yep, that one.Cliche, isn't it?
1/17/2004 c22 Lorelei
OMG...i've been reading ur story and it's great...since then i've been checkn 4 updates, please update sonn...like, tomorrow? hehe, just kidding, but seriously, update! i love ur story a lot. LOL! :-p
OMG...i've been reading ur story and it's great...since then i've been checkn 4 updates, please update sonn...like, tomorrow? hehe, just kidding, but seriously, update! i love ur story a lot. LOL! :-p