for No Other One5/5/2003 c13 
6Lisa0211
well, although it's a cliffhanger. It's not that bad. at least they're together. Now, I hope no one walks in cause, that would be very bad! Write more please!
6Lisa0211well, although it's a cliffhanger. It's not that bad. at least they're together. Now, I hope no one walks in cause, that would be very bad! Write more please!
5/3/2003 c12 3SKACHICK
no just let her give in! if she doesnt want him..i do :) lol and ur welcome for my idea! lol hope fay and chris are gonna work out :) well i g2g now! ttyl and update soon!
3SKACHICKno just let her give in! if she doesnt want him..i do :) lol and ur welcome for my idea! lol hope fay and chris are gonna work out :) well i g2g now! ttyl and update soon!
5/2/2003 c12 Paige
No... don't leave it like that... its not fair lol... i want more haha... its great I love your story... update ASAP :0)
No... don't leave it like that... its not fair lol... i want more haha... its great I love your story... update ASAP :0)
5/2/2003 c12 Rachel
luv the story! update when u can!
luv the story! update when u can!
5/2/2003 c12 2playdoh with me-o
haha, yes! hes tryin to apoligize, i wish she would see it, but this is awesome! But what about Trisha, i think her name is, will she go after Ryan or what, or hopefully Paige and Ryan get back together. Anyways! this is an awesome story!
2playdoh with me-ohaha, yes! hes tryin to apoligize, i wish she would see it, but this is awesome! But what about Trisha, i think her name is, will she go after Ryan or what, or hopefully Paige and Ryan get back together. Anyways! this is an awesome story!
5/2/2003 c12 Alaia
This is so great...u should really keep goin wit it...it has an awesome plot and it really keeps the viewer interested...please keep going! update son
This is so great...u should really keep goin wit it...it has an awesome plot and it really keeps the viewer interested...please keep going! update son
5/2/2003 c4 Irish Elf
What's up? I just reviewed on ch.12 and rememered i had a question for you, but
apparently you can only review once on a chapter. That's dumb. Anyway... why
doesn't Ryan fight his dad back? i mean he is seventeen or eighteen, right? Plus in
the story didn't it say something about him being built- mabey that's just the impression
I got when he beat the crap out of Danny, and when Paige really liked what she saw
at the beach when he took his shirt off. Please write me why. Bye.
What's up? I just reviewed on ch.12 and rememered i had a question for you, but
apparently you can only review once on a chapter. That's dumb. Anyway... why
doesn't Ryan fight his dad back? i mean he is seventeen or eighteen, right? Plus in
the story didn't it say something about him being built- mabey that's just the impression
I got when he beat the crap out of Danny, and when Paige really liked what she saw
at the beach when he took his shirt off. Please write me why. Bye.
5/2/2003 c12 Irish Elf
This story is so great! I love it! I hope you get the next chapter up soon, i can't wait
to see what happens next. Your a good writer, do you have any more fics up? If
you do could you tell me the name of it? Well g2g, i'm in the middle of a class and the
teacher is making me get off. This teacher sucks. Bye.
This story is so great! I love it! I hope you get the next chapter up soon, i can't wait
to see what happens next. Your a good writer, do you have any more fics up? If
you do could you tell me the name of it? Well g2g, i'm in the middle of a class and the
teacher is making me get off. This teacher sucks. Bye.
5/2/2003 c12 Kirstills
Hey, this is good. I like ppl whoz work make me actually imagine the scenario. This is actually better than most things iv reviewed (which iznt that often). Well done, and please continue!
Hey, this is good. I like ppl whoz work make me actually imagine the scenario. This is actually better than most things iv reviewed (which iznt that often). Well done, and please continue!
5/2/2003 c12 sourlysour
Awsome story! I really liked the dialouge. It wasn't too corny like others ive read-from other people. Keep up what your doing!
Awsome story! I really liked the dialouge. It wasn't too corny like others ive read-from other people. Keep up what your doing!
5/2/2003 c12 16luvurflyingmonkey123
They have to be together! Wow this is awesome. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. The only problem I have with it is there are so many sub plots, and it's kinda confusing... yeah. But that's just me.
16luvurflyingmonkey123They have to be together! Wow this is awesome. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. The only problem I have with it is there are so many sub plots, and it's kinda confusing... yeah. But that's just me.