for No Other One9/8/2003 c22 5239
hey, gothicflavor...i have been checking your story for weeks and only to find out you're not updating it...now i know why...:-)
good luck on your surfing competitions and i can't wait for the next chapter, really. LOL:-)
hey, gothicflavor...i have been checking your story for weeks and only to find out you're not updating it...now i know why...:-)
good luck on your surfing competitions and i can't wait for the next chapter, really. LOL:-)
8/23/2003 c22 xdemolitionxloversx
GOOD LUCK! YOU SURF? HOW COOL! I WANNA LEARN...ANYWHO, WIN ALOT OF THEM OR WHATEVER! GOOD LUCK AND UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU GET BACK. WALK IN THE DOOR AND GO STRAIGHT TO YOUR COMPUTER...HEHEHE...
GOOD LUCK! YOU SURF? HOW COOL! I WANNA LEARN...ANYWHO, WIN ALOT OF THEM OR WHATEVER! GOOD LUCK AND UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU GET BACK. WALK IN THE DOOR AND GO STRAIGHT TO YOUR COMPUTER...HEHEHE...
8/22/2003 c22 Elven Fire not signed in
hey...stoppin in the wish you *the* very best of luck.
cheers!
-x-Sa
hey...stoppin in the wish you *the* very best of luck.
cheers!
-x-Sa
8/22/2003 c22 
6MelanieJan
HEY! This is an awsome story. And I can' t wait to read more. Good luck on your competitions, hope you have fun. :D:D:D
6MelanieJanHEY! This is an awsome story. And I can' t wait to read more. Good luck on your competitions, hope you have fun. :D:D:D
8/22/2003 c1 9Peg Pannery
Your story is sweet, but it needs work. First off, I think everything happened a little fast, it might need to be slowed and spread out differently. Keep it up!
9Peg PanneryYour story is sweet, but it needs work. First off, I think everything happened a little fast, it might need to be slowed and spread out differently. Keep it up!
8/16/2003 c21 1yearslater
I LOVE YOUR STORY! oh my god its so good. cant wait for the next chappy. yay!
1yearslaterI LOVE YOUR STORY! oh my god its so good. cant wait for the next chappy. yay!
8/6/2003 c21 12Little Mermaid
yah...doesn't sound like there's much left to do. unless you wanna play some more with danny and all that junk. but all in all, it's pretty good anyways (at least i think so)
update asap
12Little Mermaidyah...doesn't sound like there's much left to do. unless you wanna play some more with danny and all that junk. but all in all, it's pretty good anyways (at least i think so)
update asap
8/4/2003 c21 2Starryi
Greatwriterofthe20thcentury is right!
You need a roadtrip! (Yeah, i do read all the reviews people put in before I review, I'm an idiot...) A roadtrip woulld be great. You cxould have Paige and Ryan go on it, have have Danny follow them or something, I dunno.. OOh, and the chapter should be named, 'Park Flasbacks' Stupid I know... I am an idiot, I do not deny that! Okay, update soon! Bye bye!
Starryi
P.S. Thanks for reading my story, sadly I have to keep it on hold for a while, I don't know when I'll update it. I'm in a period of should I discontinue it or not..
2StarryiGreatwriterofthe20thcentury is right!
You need a roadtrip! (Yeah, i do read all the reviews people put in before I review, I'm an idiot...) A roadtrip woulld be great. You cxould have Paige and Ryan go on it, have have Danny follow them or something, I dunno.. OOh, and the chapter should be named, 'Park Flasbacks' Stupid I know... I am an idiot, I do not deny that! Okay, update soon! Bye bye!
Starryi
P.S. Thanks for reading my story, sadly I have to keep it on hold for a while, I don't know when I'll update it. I'm in a period of should I discontinue it or not..
8/2/2003 c21 duckie
i forgot the name i used...it mighta been wheresmymind...i liek this i have no ideas though because im mad at some dude named Ryan...so update soon!
~terra
i forgot the name i used...it mighta been wheresmymind...i liek this i have no ideas though because im mad at some dude named Ryan...so update soon!
~terra
8/1/2003 c21 the sneak ruler of possums
hm...i dont know if anyone has suggested this yet, but maybe have some issues with ryan and danny? cos it looks like it would fit right in with the story
hm...i dont know if anyone has suggested this yet, but maybe have some issues with ryan and danny? cos it looks like it would fit right in with the story