for The Nanny's friend9/7/2007 c13 
170.0 NightRiders 0.0
erm. what the hell is with this chapter?
it has nothing to do with the 12 before it
its awsome aswel as the other 12
but u have completely thrown me off
whats with it?
a different story no?
ah well, u dont have to respond if u dont want to
Samantha
170.0 NightRiders 0.0erm. what the hell is with this chapter?
it has nothing to do with the 12 before it
its awsome aswel as the other 12
but u have completely thrown me off
whats with it?
a different story no?
ah well, u dont have to respond if u dont want to
Samantha
8/30/2007 c12 Guest
Beautiful story, very good quality much like you're older ones. Loved it but I don't know what chapter thirteen has to do with the rest. It should be in "No idea"
Beautiful story, very good quality much like you're older ones. Loved it but I don't know what chapter thirteen has to do with the rest. It should be in "No idea"
1/11/2007 c1 Ethiobabe
Hey
I read some of ur stories. They are good. But ever time I read the summary I always think the main chracter is the friend. Like in this story, I thought the main chracter was Catherine, and it is her story. But it turend out to be Jacuqui storie. So I think u need to chang ur summaries. And I hate how all of the main chracter like Catherine always get another guy, the reader doens't even now. Like Rob!. I think u should do a story where the guy, like Mac realizes he makes a mistake and falls for Catherine. I think the would make a intresting plot line. I think u are a great writer. Sorry if i sound harsh. But I jus go to tell u!
Ethiobabe
Hey
I read some of ur stories. They are good. But ever time I read the summary I always think the main chracter is the friend. Like in this story, I thought the main chracter was Catherine, and it is her story. But it turend out to be Jacuqui storie. So I think u need to chang ur summaries. And I hate how all of the main chracter like Catherine always get another guy, the reader doens't even now. Like Rob!. I think u should do a story where the guy, like Mac realizes he makes a mistake and falls for Catherine. I think the would make a intresting plot line. I think u are a great writer. Sorry if i sound harsh. But I jus go to tell u!
Ethiobabe
6/25/2006 c13 bn
? wuz chp 13 for?
? wuz chp 13 for?
6/26/2005 c12 1RedRoses08
i loved this story it was absolutely fantastic... please write more like it...
1RedRoses08i loved this story it was absolutely fantastic... please write more like it...
6/13/2005 c12 emerald
aww that was so great! and gosh seriously if there were real men like mac out there- sexy, sweet, smart and rich! and so persistent...i love it when guys go all crazy behind you...and jacqui is perfect for him too...great story! get it published girl!
aww that was so great! and gosh seriously if there were real men like mac out there- sexy, sweet, smart and rich! and so persistent...i love it when guys go all crazy behind you...and jacqui is perfect for him too...great story! get it published girl!
5/26/2005 c1 anonomoose
it's a great title!
it's a great title!
8/30/2004 c3 Dawn
Hi,
It is "would have" or "would've", not 'would of'. However, it is a great story.
Have a look at "Eats, shoots and leaves". Great book.
Hi,
It is "would have" or "would've", not 'would of'. However, it is a great story.
Have a look at "Eats, shoots and leaves". Great book.
8/30/2004 c3 Dawn
Hi,
It is "would have" or "would've", not 'would of'. However, it is a great story.
Have a look at "Eats, shoots and leaves". Great book.
Hi,
It is "would have" or "would've", not 'would of'. However, it is a great story.
Have a look at "Eats, shoots and leaves". Great book.
4/29/2004 c13 51
out of curiosity, did u realize that u added a chapter of No Idea onto the end of this story?
out of curiosity, did u realize that u added a chapter of No Idea onto the end of this story?
4/10/2004 c12 jill
I really liked this. good story!
I really liked this. good story!
1/3/2004 c11 20Global Nomad
is everybody against that poor little girl? poor poor catherine! i feel really bad for her, but that's just me it's your story. and i think jordan's getting an atitude about that red dress what do you think? i think so. and so mac asked her to amrry him huh? or did that happen in the last chapter? oh well whho cares i don't. okay so spur of the moment, yes it was too fast i tell you, he asks her to marry himand poor catherine is doomed to a life of exile and torment! oh! how awful life is. she should murder them both on their wedding night for jealousy and maddness sake, i would if i were her. but then if i were her mac would haveknown my rfeelingslong ago. well ont o the next chapter. we!
20Global Nomadis everybody against that poor little girl? poor poor catherine! i feel really bad for her, but that's just me it's your story. and i think jordan's getting an atitude about that red dress what do you think? i think so. and so mac asked her to amrry him huh? or did that happen in the last chapter? oh well whho cares i don't. okay so spur of the moment, yes it was too fast i tell you, he asks her to marry himand poor catherine is doomed to a life of exile and torment! oh! how awful life is. she should murder them both on their wedding night for jealousy and maddness sake, i would if i were her. but then if i were her mac would haveknown my rfeelingslong ago. well ont o the next chapter. we!
1/3/2004 c10 Global Nomad
you're not going to believe this but i was so ready for the next chaoter that i almost forgot to review this one. i'm into reviewing every chapter even if i don't have anything to say. and i really don't because i didn't notice any problems with this chapter, and if i did i don't remember, and it was well written so i guess that's all i have to say.
you're not going to believe this but i was so ready for the next chaoter that i almost forgot to review this one. i'm into reviewing every chapter even if i don't have anything to say. and i really don't because i didn't notice any problems with this chapter, and if i did i don't remember, and it was well written so i guess that's all i have to say.