for War5/22/2003 c1 
31Modern Poet
The start of it didn't really speak to me, but the end was really good. All in all it was pretty good-good points.
31Modern PoetThe start of it didn't really speak to me, but the end was really good. All in all it was pretty good-good points.
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
True. War does not really achieve anything except to keep the human population numbers controlled...
~Isay
15IsayTrue. War does not really achieve anything except to keep the human population numbers controlled...
~Isay
4/22/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
Eww! 'The final splatter of blood' *lol* Sorry, I'm just... *lol* Anyways, that was good! :)
Vnomi. ;)
72CancerianQueenEww! 'The final splatter of blood' *lol* Sorry, I'm just... *lol* Anyways, that was good! :)
Vnomi. ;)
4/10/2003 c1 122Free-Writer
Wow! great poem! This shows a wonderful side of war that I have thought about many times. Keep writing!
122Free-WriterWow! great poem! This shows a wonderful side of war that I have thought about many times. Keep writing!
4/9/2003 c1 RainShadow2005
Amazing! I loved it. So much meaning. I love the sentence "For we are all human" because that's the same theory I say to people when we're discussing hate crimes.
Amazing! I loved it. So much meaning. I love the sentence "For we are all human" because that's the same theory I say to people when we're discussing hate crimes.
4/4/2003 c1 1PossessedByTheSquirrels
Very nice indeed. Nicely written, I enjoyed reading...yea I don't know what else to say but I will keep this on my favorite stories list.
1PossessedByTheSquirrelsVery nice indeed. Nicely written, I enjoyed reading...yea I don't know what else to say but I will keep this on my favorite stories list.
4/4/2003 c1 98Not Just a Little Girl
Love that last line, so true it is.
sorry it took so long to review you back!
ps: (sounds a bit like yoda my review does)
98Not Just a Little GirlLove that last line, so true it is.
sorry it took so long to review you back!
ps: (sounds a bit like yoda my review does)