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10/9/2003 c1 31ButterfliKysses
I like it. It sounds like a simple sentence but I don't know how else to describe how I feel.
3/31/2003 c1 MelodyReiterLee
This is a really nice poem. Good job. Nice use of repetition.
3/31/2003 c1 75valpincon
really sweet and sad...i love the repetition and the rhythm and the rhyme... a rather overused theme given new life by excellent handling. well done!
3/31/2003 c1 2Fantome
Very visual poem. I really like the rhythm and wording of the last four lines. Very good!

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