for Reality12/27/2003 c1 Lori Brennan
They sound more like spiteful sprites! I love how you gave them powerful arms, day dreams can have a strong grasp.
They sound more like spiteful sprites! I love how you gave them powerful arms, day dreams can have a strong grasp.
7/28/2003 c1 
96AutumnRhapsody
That's cool. I don't really think there should really be a reality...well actually but still. You forgot the comma after purple.
I like it. Keep up the good work.
96AutumnRhapsodyThat's cool. I don't really think there should really be a reality...well actually but still. You forgot the comma after purple.
I like it. Keep up the good work.
7/18/2003 c1 swimhoppa
cool ... i like inneresting poems and stories ... that's how i write ... :) nice work!
cool ... i like inneresting poems and stories ... that's how i write ... :) nice work!
6/2/2003 c1 RoseMeade
Alright this one's my favorite of all you've listed here at this site.
Way to go girl! You are on your way to being able to communicate in a lovely way.
Talk soon. Really nice poem.
RoseMeade (pen name)
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Alright this one's my favorite of all you've listed here at this site.
Way to go girl! You are on your way to being able to communicate in a lovely way.
Talk soon. Really nice poem.
RoseMeade (pen name)
(VicToria Tallman Freudiger)
http:/w.amateurwritersassociation.org please take a peek and see if you'd like to become a member of our great team of writers that write all over the WorldWideWeb...
5/16/2003 c1 1Hobbitman001
I think you should think twice next time you claim you havent smoked weed.
From-Chocolate
1Hobbitman001I think you should think twice next time you claim you havent smoked weed.
From-Chocolate
5/14/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
sounds like a dream at first and then waking up to reality...I like the contrast, really great.
Thank's for the nice reviews! ^_^
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomsounds like a dream at first and then waking up to reality...I like the contrast, really great.
Thank's for the nice reviews! ^_^
cio, hoellenwauwau
5/13/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
wonderful poem! nicely written, nice images it paints in my mind. i like the ending... nice job! keep on writing! and thanks for the review!
36obsidian katanawonderful poem! nicely written, nice images it paints in my mind. i like the ending... nice job! keep on writing! and thanks for the review!
4/20/2003 c1 1aleppine
Nice! 'Can't remember what they said, something about being brave ...' 'Singing about the sea'. Fits well together. Good work.
1aleppineNice! 'Can't remember what they said, something about being brave ...' 'Singing about the sea'. Fits well together. Good work.
4/17/2003 c1 Blackest Night
hey i really like this..reality sucks! and u kno ur rite...living in dreams is way better, and Ive been trying 2 tell people that my whole life...most people are just too caught up in their little worlds to see how wrong they are! anywayz, luv it! keep on writn girl!
hey i really like this..reality sucks! and u kno ur rite...living in dreams is way better, and Ive been trying 2 tell people that my whole life...most people are just too caught up in their little worlds to see how wrong they are! anywayz, luv it! keep on writn girl!
4/13/2003 c1 29MelodyReiterLee
Nice job writing the poem. Rhyme works well with this type of poem. Well, I think it sounds great anyway. Don't worry about not remembering when you wrote this. It's still good. ^_^ Keep writing!
29MelodyReiterLeeNice job writing the poem. Rhyme works well with this type of poem. Well, I think it sounds great anyway. Don't worry about not remembering when you wrote this. It's still good. ^_^ Keep writing!