for Beautiful Day4/27/2003 c1 
36obsidian katana
yeah, war does cause a lot of evil in this world, can't leave a peaceful beautiful day alone. oh well. nice job on this! keep on writing!
36obsidian katanayeah, war does cause a lot of evil in this world, can't leave a peaceful beautiful day alone. oh well. nice job on this! keep on writing!
4/27/2003 c1 30promiscuous girl
Wow, ur vision in this poem is great, and I really like the lines:
"Of the flowers and the birds
Are the feathers and petals."
Sugar Cookies and Whipped Cream -
Lianna
30promiscuous girlWow, ur vision in this poem is great, and I really like the lines:
"Of the flowers and the birds
Are the feathers and petals."
Sugar Cookies and Whipped Cream -
Lianna
4/23/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
Great poem, nice imagery! It's about war, that's sad, but still well done! Keep it up!
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomGreat poem, nice imagery! It's about war, that's sad, but still well done! Keep it up!
cio, hoellenwauwau
4/9/2003 c1 Elaine
short, but i can picture a heart-breaking story. another great work! keep it up!
short, but i can picture a heart-breaking story. another great work! keep it up!