for Fanning the flames10/1/2003 c1 
23Shalott13
Oh, you're right - creepy but cool. I enjoyed the way you broke up the lines and wrote it as more of a thought process and what went through the narrator's mind. Wonderfully done.
23Shalott13Oh, you're right - creepy but cool. I enjoyed the way you broke up the lines and wrote it as more of a thought process and what went through the narrator's mind. Wonderfully done.
4/10/2003 c1 13tainted mind
very interesting...lol kinda weird, but i really like it(weird isnt bad ;)) lol keep writing!
13tainted mindvery interesting...lol kinda weird, but i really like it(weird isnt bad ;)) lol keep writing!
4/1/2003 c1 lostrunner
Miamouse, hey, I thought this was a really good poem. And I got the impression that you have an eating disorder. Although, that may not be the case (I have one myself) I guess I'm pretty out of it, not eating is the cause. Anyways, if you ever want to talk about anything then you can just email me at .
Miamouse, hey, I thought this was a really good poem. And I got the impression that you have an eating disorder. Although, that may not be the case (I have one myself) I guess I'm pretty out of it, not eating is the cause. Anyways, if you ever want to talk about anything then you can just email me at .