for People Watching1/5/2008 c1 Diane
I love to people-watch, it is fun to imagine stuff about random people you see. Just wondering how you can tell if it is blood flecks under the nails, or just plain dirt. I guess that is where you have to use your imagination. McEachern has taken the relaxing past-time of people watching and turned it into something chilling. I will never make eye contact with an average nondescript person again, especially if he has a knife in his pocket.
I love to people-watch, it is fun to imagine stuff about random people you see. Just wondering how you can tell if it is blood flecks under the nails, or just plain dirt. I guess that is where you have to use your imagination. McEachern has taken the relaxing past-time of people watching and turned it into something chilling. I will never make eye contact with an average nondescript person again, especially if he has a knife in his pocket.
2/17/2005 c1 aussiegal
I like this story..it's short, quick, and creepy. It chills you enough, even though it's so short. I like that you don't know anything about that person that looked *ordinary*...it makes everything else seem so real.
I like this story..it's short, quick, and creepy. It chills you enough, even though it's so short. I like that you don't know anything about that person that looked *ordinary*...it makes everything else seem so real.
4/6/2004 c1 
7Samurai101
Yeah I'd run as fast as I could if I saw a guy with blood under his fingernails... Nice story, short, but fun. ^.^ I liked it.
7Samurai101Yeah I'd run as fast as I could if I saw a guy with blood under his fingernails... Nice story, short, but fun. ^.^ I liked it.
6/9/2003 c1 7Ron R
The story was great until the ending. I mean a creepy killer guy would probably have some way to track down AAron. Maybe I've seen a few too many movies though and I'm just an idiot. You know what, good job for breaking the conformity where the killer is obsessed and chases to the ends of the earth. You'd think killers would go for the easiest victim and not bother to chase. I've talked myself into thnking it's an excellent story!
7Ron RThe story was great until the ending. I mean a creepy killer guy would probably have some way to track down AAron. Maybe I've seen a few too many movies though and I'm just an idiot. You know what, good job for breaking the conformity where the killer is obsessed and chases to the ends of the earth. You'd think killers would go for the easiest victim and not bother to chase. I've talked myself into thnking it's an excellent story!
4/18/2003 c1 Miranda Crystal-Bearer
*Snorts*
Sorry. I read horror stories for fun. ^^ My twisted sense of humour... Very nice descriptions. Few people put in great detail. A very pleasing story, save perhaps that one word near the end. Very realistic, too.
Kudos.
*Snorts*
Sorry. I read horror stories for fun. ^^ My twisted sense of humour... Very nice descriptions. Few people put in great detail. A very pleasing story, save perhaps that one word near the end. Very realistic, too.
Kudos.
4/1/2003 c1 Strega Brava
You're right...this is creepy. Another nicely written vignette. Kudos to Mark.
You're right...this is creepy. Another nicely written vignette. Kudos to Mark.
4/1/2003 c1 49The Hitokiri Onigiri
*shivers* Oi! That WAS freaky... Now I'm going to imagine there's some guy outside my window as I'm trying to fall asleep... *suddenly grins* But this was so well written that I'm sure it's worth it! Awesome story - keep up the good work!
49The Hitokiri Onigiri*shivers* Oi! That WAS freaky... Now I'm going to imagine there's some guy outside my window as I'm trying to fall asleep... *suddenly grins* But this was so well written that I'm sure it's worth it! Awesome story - keep up the good work!