5/23/2005 c1 2Eternally Eris
Hullo there. A thought I would review and give you a little advice. The story is interesting but it is VERY difficult to read. You really should use the enter key and break up the parts. It makes it so much easier to read and more people will want to read it.
Hullo there. A thought I would review and give you a little advice. The story is interesting but it is VERY difficult to read. You really should use the enter key and break up the parts. It makes it so much easier to read and more people will want to read it.
4/3/2003 c1 dark-kissed-angel
I've done a good job right? i have't seen any reviewing my story, is it that bad of a job? -_- if feel so bad, am working on the next part. like anyone cares if its done or not. but this was a hard story to write at all, its full of odd little people and adding the flash backs to its was hell to pay. I've done the hard part, but it was the ending that left me brain dead! i couldn't think,yep! so i'll add the next part soon so wait and see! ^-^ peace out, dark-kissed-angel!
I've done a good job right? i have't seen any reviewing my story, is it that bad of a job? -_- if feel so bad, am working on the next part. like anyone cares if its done or not. but this was a hard story to write at all, its full of odd little people and adding the flash backs to its was hell to pay. I've done the hard part, but it was the ending that left me brain dead! i couldn't think,yep! so i'll add the next part soon so wait and see! ^-^ peace out, dark-kissed-angel!