for My Dream4/8/2003 c1 DivaKitti05
**sigh** I wish... ah well. Doesn't matter what I wish. Keep writing, and as always ignore the opinion of the stupid person!
**sigh** I wish... ah well. Doesn't matter what I wish. Keep writing, and as always ignore the opinion of the stupid person!
4/1/2003 c1 
1Icarus Sun
Terrible, sugary, teeth-rotting sap. Can't say that I terribly cared for the way you wrote it, either. Do you have a beta-reader? They can suggest ways to improve it.
1Icarus SunTerrible, sugary, teeth-rotting sap. Can't say that I terribly cared for the way you wrote it, either. Do you have a beta-reader? They can suggest ways to improve it.